Congrats on page 100 , now for the review sorry cant give a long one , basically time a major constraint , but found the chapter very well written , specially initially when Ashu realises that he is not doing the right thing with mallika when all he can think of is Nidhi, then his restlessness, unwillingness to acknowledge , going that he' ll get over his infatuation , beautifully brought out , though mallika gave in very easily , probably would have done the same , she knew he didn't love her there was no spark , a sensible educated wan would walk away which mallika , you can't fight for something which was never yours , you brought it out so well without lowering her dignity as they did in the serial thank you my dear , waiting to see how you progress from here
@Green - thank you so much dr. Babs and also thanks a lot for taking time from your tight schedule to give me a second more detailed review.
@ red - u liked that scene? thank you. I had some doubts abt that scene..
@blue - thank you, I am glad it came out well.
@brown - yeah many of u will feel that she gave in too easily. But if u look at it this way - she waited for him too long and then she kind of got him, she kind of did not get the whole of him so to say. Also, please read my response to Suvika on page 100 - to get more idea of her POV,
@Pink - you are most welcome. yeah the challenge for me has just began...
