Loved the chap Shirley...very well written...great narration
Liking Ashutosh's confusions and the way he is trying to appease and substantiate the tussle between his heart and mind...I wonder how much time he is going to take to realise the meaning of his state...
Again I feel bad for Malika...poor she...even if she won't come to know but the fact remains Nidhi has made entry into his heart first...not sure how you are going to take the story forward... (Are you sure? This time, it may be AshMal and Nihan - wat say? )
In terms of temper I feel role reversals between Ashutosh and Arman...Arman burning with rage!!!!!!
Please don't mind if I say you have gone a step ahead KP ji in making Nidhi's character...OMG today's age young woman she doesn't know how to make resume' and doesn't know formatting...you know how today's generation kids are??? But kudos to you...you have done a good job in portraying the character she is...