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ManVeer SS ||Crossroads||NOTE Pg14 (Page 13)

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
hey thanks fr gvin us an update,i am jst loving bth ur past and present!!!!! aha aso duay also gt smitten by sme1!!! uday's pov was jst amazingg!!!!!! loved it!!! it would sound weird bt i am ling j mre than ashi,actually bcoz j is indrctly playign a cupid bt ashi,she is spoiling everythng!!! neways plzzz do cntinue soon!!!!!!SmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by roopali15

hey nice update
specially the past scene
naow lets see what ashi is upto
and what this jay was saying
i mean uday was serious with manyata
seriously u r caring the suspence very nicely 
waiting for ur update

Thanks Roopali :) That's the whole purpose of writing both in past and present together to keep the suspense alive and I m glad that you are enjoying itEmbarrassed
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by capriya

hai i just read all the chapters.very nice concept.its very clearly feel that uday is in love with manyata.loved the story.

Thanks! I hope you will continue reading the future chapter tooEmbarrassed
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jarin04

You really are an amazing writer. this story is getting really interesting wid each update. liked the way u r managing to show the past nd present together. can't wait for the date. Uday is going to get a shock. do update soon. Waiting eagerly. btw i've becum fan of your writing. Keep writing nd keep rocking girl

Thank you so much!!! Trust me it's quite a pain to write in past and present and I m happy that you are finding my efforts interesting to readEmbarrassed I will try to update soon such sweet  words from readers always encourages me Big smile btw do feel free to criticize too!

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pia.raha

hey thanks fr gvin us an update,i am jst loving bth ur past and present!!!!! aha aso duay also gt smitten by sme1!!! uday's pov was jst amazingg!!!!!! loved it!!! it would sound weird bt i am ling j mre than ashi,actually bcoz j is indrctly playign a cupid bt ashi,she is spoiling everythng!!! neways plzzz do cntinue soon!!!!!!SmileSmileSmile

Thanks! Glad that you enjoyed reading the part makes me super happy as a writerBig smile Well Jay has always been an indirect Cupid for ManVeer even in the show that's why I never hated her as such. Give Aashi a chance she might end up being a cupid tooWinkLOL

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by JustLikeMe1

Originally posted by Jarin04

You really are an amazing writer. this story is getting really interesting wid each update. liked the way u r managing to show the past nd present together. can't wait for the date. Uday is going to get a shock. do update soon. Waiting eagerly. btw i've becum fan of your writing. Keep writing nd keep rocking girl


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thank you so much!!! Trust me it's quite a pain to write in past and present and I m happy that you are finding my efforts interesting to readEmbarrassedI will try to update soon such sweet words from readers always encourages meBig smilebtw do feel free to criticize too!</font>
what friends r for ? will surely criticize u when u need it. Nd the pleasure is all mine.

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
I am soo soo soo sorry for not commenting on chapter 6 before
I will like both the updates from my lappy
Both chapters were superb
I loved chapter 6
Manaya and ashi and uday and manyata and flashback and present
U write brilliantly
And always manage to leave me speechless
Chapter 7 was beautiful and flawless
loved every snall line and word
U r amazing writer
Thanks sooo much for the pm
Love u sooo much
Autograph please ;P
Thank u for such an amazing story :D

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
Hey di
How you? Smile
I'm so sorry for the late reply
Truly amazing, awesome, mind-blowing update Clap Thumbs Up
Loved it loads Heart Star
Wow, looks like that girl Uday fell in love with in colleage was no one else but Manyata
The flashback truly amazing, first Manyata had it n now Uday
Wonder how he's going to react after seeing Manyata's friend n so called boyfriend
Jai is as evil as always
Wonder how she's going to react when she finds out that Uday's girlfriend from colleage was no one else but her jiji LOL
Thanks for the pm Smile
Plz update soon Big smile

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