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ManVeer SS ||Crossroads||NOTE Pg14 (Page 12)

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 2:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cnibir

I love how you write part of the update in flashback and part of it in present... very nicely written and i have fallen in love with the concept fully. 

I wonder what is cooking in Aashi's brain... Manyata should just except that she is in love with UV... can't wait for that day but for now i am enjoying this nok jhoks between Manyata and UV.

Thank you for the PM and keep writing amazingly...

Thanks!! I actually enjoy writing the Flashbacks more but just to keep the mystery intact I choose to write both together. If I give out the whole story in flashback the story will become boring (I m assuming it isn't nowLOL)

The next chapter is up but I couldn't send PMs as I-F limits the number of PMs I can send Ouch

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by serat

Awesome update
Loved it
Manyta friend is back is awesome
But I wonder how they became best friends
Nd
Why manyta uday hate so much
Plzzz
Next chap update soon
Can't wait
Plzzz

Thanks! Next chapter is up tooEmbarrassed Sorry I couldn't send a PM as I-F won't let me to Ouch How Manyata and Aashi became friends is not much of a story actuallyLOL Why Manyata hates Uday so much is the storyWink
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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 2:07am | IP Logged
dips super update.

love ur style of writing.
woow now uv will come devgarh.
here also j is villian type.
wana to know wat aashi & M planned.
plz continue soon.

pm me next time.

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 2:11am | IP Logged
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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...anju...

dips super update.

love ur style of writing.
woow now uv will come devgarh.
here also j is villian type.
wana to know wat aashi & M planned.
plz continue soon.

pm me next time.

Thanks Anju! J isn't actuallly a villain she just told what she observed about Uday. Sorry about the PMing thing I-F allows me to send just 10 PMs in 24 hours and since this update was within 24 hours I could't send any PMsOuch
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 8:49am | IP Logged
hey nice update
specially the past scene
naow lets see what ashi is upto
and what this jay was saying
i mean uday was serious with manyata
seriously u r caring the suspence very nicely 
waiting for ur update

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:51am | IP Logged
hai i just read all the chapters.very nice concept.its very clearly feel that uday is in love with manyata.loved the story.

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
You really are an amazing writer. this story is getting really interesting wid each update. liked the way u r managing to show the past nd present together. can't wait for the date. Uday is going to get a shock. do update soon. Waiting eagerly. btw i've becum fan of your writing. Keep writing nd keep rocking girl

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