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kahaN GayA UssE DhoondhO- A KriYaM 3 ShoT pt 2 PG9 (Page 8)

Dead_Nightmare IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
Awesome os

taarey-forever Goldie

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 2:22am | IP Logged
superb .. ! Clap Thumbs Up

i 2 luv kriyaam'z bond .. ! Embarrassed

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. Smile
ProngsPadsMoony IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
awesome cont soon

you made me nostalgic
Sweet.Sarcastic Goldie

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:43am | IP Logged

      a big thanks to all these people for liking and reading...Big smileHug

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and many of u guys who asked me..Smile

yes I AM A TR fan..WinkLOL

but i love SS and KR the same way..Embarrassed

Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 28 June 2013 at 1:50am

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Sweet.Sarcastic Goldie

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 1:51am | IP Logged

First of all.. thanks MT diii u sent all pms warna god knows who would read this..

Then all of u..

Thanks a lot guys..

This huge response means a lot..

I think now I can write KR..

Guys.. m sorry for bringing in taani in this but thanks madhu diii..

I realized now'

But don't worry//.. chapter 3 ending will b sumthing different.. maybe then gusa thanda hojaae..

This chapter was written long back..

So cant change it.

Pls bear me and my taani in this one..but I think it will b a better one..






The morning after bhai's nostalgic dance and drama I go to college and try to know from everyone about KRIYA GHAI..

Some told me she was a fighter..

Some told that she was gandhiji of st.louis..

Some told me that she was the best dancer one would come across..

And Someone also told me that she was a girl behind whom reyaansh singhania used 2 wander with all might..

Some told me she had slapped THE REYAANSH infront of every one..

Some told that she was Sharon's biggest enemy..

And Some told me she was bhai's best friend..

But I wanted 2know about her personal life..

Where she stayed? Where was she from?  Where is she now? Why did she go?

But whenever  I asked those questions to anyone..

They simply nodded negatively..

But god isn't that bad.. is he??!!

I met a girl who had gone to kriya's house for dance auditions..

Luckily she still remembered the address'

I quickly noted down the address and informed bhai before leaving..

I said I m going to get him a gift..

I would try to find out kriya and if I wouldn't b successful.. I would buy bhai some new hoodies..

I reached that house which kriya had used for her shelter long ago..

But now there was some MR.&MRS. THAKKAR living there..

I thought of going back. But then I thought let me give it a chance.. what's the loss!!

So I rang the bell and to my surprise.. they were people I knew..

Tauji's friends.. they lived in jodhpur long back..

So I get in their house after them welcoming me and exchanging pleasentaries..

I asked them from when they stay here..

They at first give me weird looks but then they reply.. "one year"thakkar uncle told..

"you own it or it is rented!!"I ask again this time sounding like a gossip monger to them..

Again uncle replies.. "rented..!!"

This time I sense that I should  tell them why..

So I calmly say  "actually.. this was.. umm.ummm my friends house long ago.

And then she suddenly  vanished..  so I was trying to find her" I complete my sentence looking in the coffee mug aunty had given me..

Uncle  sees my tensed look and decides to help..

He slips out his galaxy S4 and dials a number..

He goes for a while aside and then comes back smiling..

"taani beta.. I think I can help u.. I'll send u an address of the estate agent who suggested me this house..

He has the contact details of the last owner.. so u can get it from him"

He says as a wide colgate or pepsodent smile comes on my face..

After a while I take my leave and go straight to that estate agent..


In his office he informs me that as the GHAI's had left the contract in b/w..he had their contact no.. and he also tells me that I get this information only as because MR.THAKKAR had told him..

He gives me 2 numbers..

I thank him and leave from there..

I reach college and find a calm place for myself..

First I try one number and it says out of reach..

And then the other one also says the same.

After trying Nth time.. I finally give up..

Then I think..

Why would I try 2 find my boyfriends ex.. no normal girl would..

And the case for me.. rey was the only aim in my life..

So why would of screwing him up..

And what if kriya comes back and rey goes to her..

I will be shattered ' I think about all this for a while and then I decide to leave it and forget..but before going.. I think of giving it one more try'

One last time I call up expecting that the number you are trying is unreachable.. pls try again later' but to my surprise I hear a beep on my phone and when I see that it shows call forwarding text.

I keep the call on ear quickly and I hear a girl saying "hello.."

Her voice was beautiful and her accent was childish..

But wait.. that was not all that I could hear.. along with her voice I heard some station mess noise '

And then I heard a lady saying..

"kriya beta.. make it quick.. reaching  meera road from VT/CST  will take a long time.. and on top isha's marriage mehendi will start soon.. we need to hurry.."

"Yes mom.. I'll just come"replied kriya.. yes kriya for sure..

Before cutting the call she again said hello twice and then hung up..

As soon as she cut the call I stood there.. awestruck..

My luck,..

Which lady would give such a big lecture 2 her daughter 2 make a call quick..

But I think that was destined 2 happen..

I  without giving it a second thought collect my belongings and rush to VT station.. with a weird feeling in my heart..

Obviously.. I am the weirdest person.. after all I am finding my boyfriends ex'

I am mad.. I don't know why am I behind all this'

But I smile thinking I will get my brother the best gift!!

Swayam's POV..

Today also I am getting the same feeling.. just like last night..

I wasn't able to concentrate on anything..

Actually nothing..

Throughout the rehearsal session I was on some other planet..

The planet of kriyas memories..

How much ever I would try.. I wouldn't get back to normal..

Sharon irritated hit me for that in front of everyone leaving all shocked 2 zenith'

But I couldn't help it..

Everytime I rehearsed  I just remembered how she had fought for everything..

Even the RH'

I remembered how we practiced awfully in the common room'

Urghhh' the  nostalgic me'. So annoying..

But still.. I wasn't even able 2 concentrate on Sharon..

Sounds impossible right.. but happened..

There are two more girls except Sharon whom I care for infinitely..

One's my sis and the other is the KRIYA GHAI..


Something grand awaits me'

I am getting that feeling..

Sixth sense..

Maybe it is NDC ..

Ya.. team decided that they will see as to who will dance seeing the dance challenge..

Am still not okk.. I guess I gotta take some real rest..

Huh.. even taani is not there.. my miss.weirdo has gone for some god knows what important work..

I miss kriya..

I seriously do..

I wish I could meet her for once and just ask her why did she leave us all like this.. why didn't she live this blessed life full of pleasures with us while she only had gifted us with it..

Why did she go.. why did u go kriya.. why did u go???


I found out that it was some ishas marriage who happened to be kriyas cousin..

So kriya n her mum had come here to attend the wedding and that they will be here for 4 days..

Thinking to meet her on the right time..

I left from there..

 I now had 2 concentrate on NDC..



At NDC venue..

Team qualified first round..

That means face off round honga..but wait..

They have given us a theme..

"Memories.. and friendship.."

A dance on this theme..

How lame'

This judge holds so many grudges against us'

While the team was busy deciding whom to send..

I remembered bhais terrace kriya dance'

Without stressing my knees.. my brain is there..

I go to the team and declare that bhai will be performing..

All give me W*F looks and bharat speaks.. "ter bhai hai isliye na.. par theek hai.. chalenga.."

"what chalenga.. ?? rey contemporary king hai.. aur ye theme pe contemporary best honga.." yelled Vicky..

"well then aap logo ko batadu ki iss wakht rey bohot hi khush hai aur isliye who sad emotions nahi laa paenge.." I told them..

But Sharon spoke..

"toh swayam kaunsa devdaas hai..

Even he is happy"

"yaa.. but bhai misses someone.." I told..

Bhai gave me confusing looks and the team asked me..


"KRIYA.." I say a little softly..

By their expressions.. It looked like I had told them that I would be raping them and cutting their heads of their body'

They looked so devastated..

Specially my bf'

Ohh he looked a person jisse 440 volt ka jhatka diya ho..

"what nonsense..?" rey tries to fight..

But I cut him in between..

"nonsense nahi sach' maine dekha hai bhai ko kriya ko yaad karte huwe..

Aur bhai ' I saw ur dance'"

I say looking at him'

I then continue..

"bhaiii.. as a sister nahi as a GS.. I think ye dance appse zyada lively aur koi nahi bana sakta' yaadein song will be perfect.. aap ready hojao..

Wear white'

And I'll make the araangements.."

And I rush out of there leaving all the devastated souls..


Uff' bhai looked so hot'

By god.. rula diya bhai ne..

Kyan dance karre hai.. manna padhenga'

Chalo me dancer nahi hun to kyaan.. I can boost around about him..





Girl.. taani tune mujhe fasa diya'

Abh rey Sharon mujhpe questions ki baadh laenge..

But still.. wonder how  taani knows so much.. not bad huh..she could be a spy..yes.. taani ke liye job dhoondh liya.. spy..

But kriya.. uska kya.. god I don't want to miss her so much..

But why.. why is god making me miss her..

Ohhh taani ke Krishna jiii aur kriya ke universe jiii..

I whole heartedly wish the best for kriya..

I wish her all the happiness and all the good she deserves..

But please..dont make me miss her so much that I become devdaas..


But god never listens to me..

I am getting more of that warm feeling in my stomach..

Huh.. I hate it..



i will be leaving IF soon so update will be soonest..Cry

but please do comment...Smile

Converting this two shot in a three shot'Embarrassed

Sorry for inconvenience..LOL

Next part after I update update vrushan two shot..Embarrassed

Got a huge response'Big smile

Expecting the very same..Embarrassed






Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 28 June 2013 at 1:59am

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-spongy- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 2:28am | IP Logged

pehle toh mehek
chapter 2 hain CHAPTER 4 NAHI...
and then me first...
finally mujhe pehla res mila.. Big smile Big smile

and now coming to the update
saali !!! AngryShocked
tune meri shaadi kara di... Confused Ouch Shocked
i know yeh OS mera BDAY GIFT hain
but it doesnt mean ki tu meri shaadi kara de...

i was drinking water when i read that line...
now just imagine what would have happen ROFL

but tune mujhe KRIYA ka cousin banaya.
im so happy... Big smile LOL

By their expressions.. It looked like I had told them that I would be raping them and cutting their heads of their body' 
ROFL simply amazing

Uff' bhai looked so hot' Shocked
mehek tu taani se kya kya karva rahi hain... LOLConfused

thanks for the PM
waiting for the next chapter...
and thanks for making it  a 3 shot Big smile

Edited by -spongy- - 28 June 2013 at 3:03am

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SanskritiS IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Amazing Smile
Taani finding Kriya n lousians all shocked to hear Kriya's name
Missu_TR IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 3:42am | IP Logged
nice update thora dar lg raha h agr kriya wapis aa gar to rey kisa ka sth dega ...

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