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th#2 FF: hold me tight *epilogue pg29uptd 9/8 (Page 27)

hiddenpearl Goldie

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 11:42am | IP Logged
perfect ending :)

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sruthick IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Aww...That was a cute Epilogue...
Lovd d way u describd bout Arnav - Aashi bond...:)

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ara_000 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
phewww i am left wit a sigh aftr reading dis epilouge Day Dreaming

u knw wat dis is wat i will say a picture perfct ending Day Dreaming

i love it how u have written each nd evrythng sooo beautifully witout missing anythng Heart

loved d scene plane scene wit arnav sitting peacefully wit two most beautiful girls of his life,one lying on his chest sound asleep nd d other holding him tightly nd sleeping peacefully nd as usual seeing his beautiful wife he could not control himslf nd kissed her on her lips making her all flushed nd yet again giving him a satisfaction dat his one touch can make her blush even in her sleep as if its meant to b..! Heart

abhi nd anji part was cute..!

I am more dan happy for anji coz i believe dat she deserves evry bit of happiness..! Big smile

arav nd ashi bond,cute infact adorable Heart

i love it how d whole family welcumed ARSHI wit open arms..!

Anrav pucking up anji nd teasing her abt her cute xpressions was beautiful Heart

khushi nd abhi bonding,superb Heart

dinner was simply d most beautiful one here where u have shown aashi nd arav bond nd arnav pampering his daughter like hell..! Heart

nd den d last part,ahhh beautiful Heart

i love it how u'have mentioned abt their love making showing dat even aftr sooo many years their love for each other has not lessened rather it has becum strong wit evry passing secnd nd no matter wat they still cannot gety enough of each other..! Heart

so arnav singh raizada standing on d poolside was talking to his mom saying her dat he is happy rather more dan happy to have a perfct family nd to see his di all happy wit her hubby...!

A girl has changed his life..!

A middle class girl who actually was nothng infront of d great ASR entered his life one day making his life tirn upside down nd making him fell in love nd making him believe dat he can also love nd his life can b perfct..!

Nd aftr two long years of their journey they r happy wit each other nd he is blessed wit an angel in his life which is d sign of their love..!

He is indeed complete now nd as a sign of his mother's blessing a rain drop fall on his cheek making him believe dat his evry prayer to give him a perfct family has been granted nd his mom's blessings will b alwaz wit him no matter wat...! Heart

nd he went back to his room to get welcumed by his angel's sleeping form nd he kissed her distrbing her beautiful nd serene sleep nd turning to d bed his wife sleeping peacefully there...!

Nd he again laid down by her side holdimg her tight nd d way he said dat he wants sumthng from her nd dats nothing but to HOLD HER TIGHT was beautiful...! Heart

i actually have goosebumps while reading d line..!

Three simple words yet holding a beautiful meaning..! Heart

bunny,u nailed it up Thumbs Up

this is one of d most beautiful epilouges i have ever read..! Heart

thank u sooo much for writing dis beautiful story nd giving us d ippurtunity to read it...!

It will remain forever in my heart coz u knw that its one of my all tym favourite one..! Heart

love ya Heart

hugs Hug

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ara_000 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
u may wonder why i did not mention shyam in my comnt so here i am to say this dat i did not want to talk abt him coz i really did not feel like taking his name in dis beautiful chappy..!

Hate him too much to mention his name nd spoil d beauty of dis chappy Angry

but deffo will b waiting for season two coz i want shyam to suffer more coz i knw he can never harm anjali coz now d whole raizada family is there wit her nd now toh abhi is also there,so he is not at all my concern...! Wink

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hariniroshini Senior Member

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Posted: 11 August 2013 at 8:20am | IP Logged
the last part where arnav wakes khushi in a sweet manner and ending line HOLD ME TIGHT was epic...
sensational ending...
loved it as a whole...
u ve done really a great job..:)
waiting for ur other works...

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Panther007 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 August 2013 at 10:05am | IP Logged
aww..lovely ending ClapClapwith arshi forever with der little bundle of joy aashi
loved itHeart

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meena_raveena Senior Member

Joined: 01 May 2012
Posts: 538

Posted: 11 August 2013 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Sorry ... I couldn't comment on the previous chapter... I'm away frm home... N i don hav my laptop wth me... Even now, i'm typing frm my phone... So i couldn't give long comments...

Its an awesome chapter... Love the Abhi-Anjali college flashback in last chapter n also their cute marriage moments...

Feel happy... Atleast Anjali hav a beautiful life aftr the storm...

N its really cute having Aarav n Aashi in tis epilogue... Aashi is so cute... As ppl use to say... Father n Daughter always shares a beautiful bond...luv the way... Aashi try to feed Arnav...

N he encourage her... Tats the correct way of teachng... Not stopping the kid always...its a real cute father-daughter moment...

N wen khushi blackmail her n Aashi wave bye to her is really awesome...Aashi proves that she's ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA's DAUGHTER... She knows her mothers tricks just like her father...

Overall its an amazing story... Gonna miss it...

So now can i get to read updates on my fav ff
PERFECT (MIS)MATCH????? I hope u will continue it soon...

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dis_arshi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 August 2013 at 1:15am | IP Logged
that was so beautiful
loved it
and also will miss it

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