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Chocolate_barun Goldie
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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 6:21am | IP Logged
nice update...the epic love story was indeed an epic failure...and his guilt and sorry were too late to amend and believe her that he indeed loved her and she was the only one who was in his hearty...may be it never is not too late...thanks for pm...update soon

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Enchante Groupbie
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Joined: 10 June 2013
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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 6:28am | IP Logged
This was effing brilliant!

He was a thunderstorm, indeed. That's such a lovely analogy, hits the nail right on it's shiny little head, doesn't it?

I agree with you so wholly on this. She should have never forgiven him. And for the sake of the show if the CVs wanted her to forgive him, there could have been better tracks like 'Arnav screws up royally and woos Khushi' or ' Arnav goes through a phase of repentance where Khushi eventually forgives him but he's not so easy on himself' 

What I would have given to watch that. 

Thank you for starting this. We needed it. Smile


Edited by Enchante - 08 July 2013 at 6:51am

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incarnadine IF-Rockerz
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Joined: 16 March 2012
Posts: 5192

Posted: 08 July 2013 at 6:49am | IP Logged

This is so wonderful!
Beautifully written!

Indeed his guilt and misdeeds were those that shouldn't have been forgiven so easily.

It pains to think that we didn't get a proper redemption track of ASR.

But this is brilliant! :)

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Arshix144 IF-Dazzler
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Joined: 24 September 2012
Posts: 3011

Posted: 08 July 2013 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant D!

I just finished reading Love was... and now you have given us this piece, you definitely showcased what I said earlier about your talent and versatility!
Too little too late indeed, your descriptive portrayal of Khushi's emotions was fantastic. Forget a redemption track the show didn't even cover a proper apology & groveling other than one little scene somewhere prior to the wedding with all the rituals and customs. There was no remorse and proper Wooing track and still Khushi forgave him so easily. *sighs I am rambling aren't I, well your update had a massive impact and I am floored! 

PS. Loved your PM, you are adorable no wonder you manage to come up with the very witty and cute diary entries for DFS! Good luck with College, do keep your readers entertained whenever you get a chance.Hug

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ranogill IF-Sizzlerz
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Joined: 12 September 2012
Posts: 18029

Posted: 08 July 2013 at 9:32am | IP Logged
poor arnav

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cheesemad IF-Sizzlerz
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Joined: 27 April 2013
Posts: 11854

Posted: 08 July 2013 at 10:27am | IP Logged
one word brilliant...
it was freaking awesome...

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katunkka Senior Member
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Joined: 22 June 2012
Posts: 628

Posted: 08 July 2013 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
you have a way with words. small but amazing and effective

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maheerah_khan Senior Member
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Joined: 06 June 2013
Posts: 599

Posted: 08 July 2013 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
ClapUr writing is extraordinary D Clap!!!!!n yes da note in da PM was quite long bt it contained many emotions...gonna miss ur regular updates and obviously uCry.Wishing u great successStar.bt plz don't forget usCry although i know u r not quittingLOL...

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