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Arshix144 IF-Dazzler
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Joined: 24 September 2012
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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant D!

I just finished reading Love was... and now you have given us this piece, you definitely showcased what I said earlier about your talent and versatility!
Too little too late indeed, your descriptive portrayal of Khushi's emotions was fantastic. Forget a redemption track the show didn't even cover a proper apology & groveling other than one little scene somewhere prior to the wedding with all the rituals and customs. There was no remorse and proper Wooing track and still Khushi forgave him so easily. *sighs I am rambling aren't I, well your update had a massive impact and I am floored! 

PS. Loved your PM, you are adorable no wonder you manage to come up with the very witty and cute diary entries for DFS! Good luck with College, do keep your readers entertained whenever you get a chance.Hug

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cheesemad IF-Sizzlerz
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Joined: 27 April 2013
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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 10:27am | IP Logged
one word brilliant...
it was freaking awesome...

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katunkka Senior Member
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Joined: 22 June 2012
Posts: 628

Posted: 08 July 2013 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
you have a way with words. small but amazing and effective

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maheerah_khan Senior Member
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Joined: 06 June 2013
Posts: 599

Posted: 08 July 2013 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
ClapUr writing is extraordinary D Clap!!!!!n yes da note in da PM was quite long bt it contained many emotions...gonna miss ur regular updates and obviously uCry.Wishing u great successStar.bt plz don't forget usCry although i know u r not quittingLOL...

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-Catharsis Groupbie
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Joined: 10 June 2013
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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Wonderful analogy! How d you get such ideas? Where do you get them from would be a better question!Tongue

Even i didnt like the whole Arnav not aologizing scenario. Power to us sister! Big smile

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Downhill IF-Addictz
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Posts: 51111

Posted: 11 July 2013 at 7:03am | IP Logged
simply fabulous..loved itc
-Cheeni- IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 12 July 2013 at 9:06am | IP Logged
that's incredible wonderful
u nailed out her emotions, her pain by distrust by him very well written
continue it soon
Crazy4Sobti IF-Dazzler
Crazy4Sobti
Crazy4Sobti

Joined: 21 April 2013
Posts: 2834

Posted: 12 July 2013 at 1:06pm | IP Logged

Now seriously you just summarize the whole "Nafraat" and "Mohabhaat" story of Arnav and Khushi in few paragraphs? And to top it you also include the incomplete emotions of the ipk fanatics? You are brilliant with wordsClapClap. What would I have not done to see Khushi become a woman and stand up to Arnav and Arnav repent for his deeds and woo Khushi? 

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