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Chocolate_barun Goldie
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Very well written and beautifuly described the emotions...continue the os...or are u planning to write a series continuation????
khushi's words hurted him as much he hurted her thanx for pm

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cool_zephyr Goldie
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Thats quite an interesting one. looking forward for more 

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katunkka Senior Member
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:46am | IP Logged
that was beautiful and very incredible. she really did need her own rant didn't she?! so powerful!

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shree10 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
That was beautiful  but felt too short. It has great potential for ss. Pl consider.
I love dthe way Khushi gave to him!

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Anarocksick IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Wow. Loved it. Arnav's reaction was chilling, the laughter was totally unexpected. Loved K's speech. You are continuing this, right? would love to read more.

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KaaminiJha Senior Member
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Dude...your stories just keep getting better and better... You've got to PM me when you update.
 
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Crazy4Sobti IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
Hi There,

That was brilliant piece of writing. I could read the whole story without having to scroll down, yet it was so powerful and said so many things in just few words - Things that I wanted Khushi to say to Arnav, things I myself wanted to say to Mr. ASR.

Beautiful!! Clap

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incarnadine IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 1:23pm | IP Logged

Awesome OS!! So beautifully written! Clap
Loved it!!  
Especially this line, "He laughed because he knew that if he stopped, he would cry..."

Perfect-o!

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