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PhoenixTears IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
You nailed it dear, short but just right on the target. Nothing more or nothing less Smile Superb, khushi indeed deserved this! Fantastic...

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Enchante Groupbie
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Del, I lurve you! I can't believe you actually listened to me! :D

You vented out my frustration too. Last few lines were brilliant...but the entire shot was. Looking forward to this so darn much! :)

Lucid Fall is an apt title. Continue soon. Waiting for the other stuff you've been working on!

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priyatnl. Goldie
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 3:20am | IP Logged
One word
Amazing...Clap

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Beautifully written ... 

Thanks ... 

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Snoowfall IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Khushi didnot need to receive a lot ranting which she did not get...

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Chocolate_barun Goldie
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Very well written and beautifuly described the emotions...continue the os...or are u planning to write a series continuation????
khushi's words hurted him as much he hurted her thanx for pm

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cheesemad IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 6:25am | IP Logged
very well written:)

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cool_zephyr Goldie
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Thats quite an interesting one. looking forward for more 

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