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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 11:21am | IP Logged
#3 Jar of Hearts.

This is the perfect thing which Khushi should have done in the show.

Funny, how Arnav, known for his mercurial temper and anger, couldn't do anything before Khushi's anger.

Khushi's retorts were too good.

".. f**king poolside."
Khushi sweared. That was fresh.

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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 11:37pm | IP Logged

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Edited by -Delilah- - 09 October 2013 at 8:22pm

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Posted: 29 September 2013 at 1:05am | IP Logged
BRILLIANT...
Beautiful portrayal of her pain n emotions...
amaxnggg writing dear...
thnxxx a lot 4 pm...
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All the best for ur exams Smile...

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Posted: 29 September 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Love alone isn't enough.
He might be her soul mate but who said living with soul mates is easy.
He's killing her bit by bit.
And finally she realizes that it will do no good to anyone if she continued this.

Letting go is important.
Glad to see Khushi doing it to release her pain.


Edited by IronButterfly - 30 September 2013 at 12:24am

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Posted: 29 September 2013 at 1:16am | IP Logged
beautiful...and thank you ...some time i wondered how khushi endure so much pain...it is because she cocooned herself...i am happy she came out 

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Posted: 29 September 2013 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Beautiful

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Posted: 29 September 2013 at 1:43am | IP Logged
That was beautiful.
The way you have depicted Khushi's emotions here is heart wrenching.
But she decided to get out of it.
Good for her.

Good luck with the exams.

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Posted: 29 September 2013 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Beautiful...ur words depicted the pain of khushi so aptly...terrrific update.

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