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1chilly IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Read the second one.

Khushi did forgive him too easily.
There was no redemption track.
That was the CVs biggest mistake.

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tinsel IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Beautifully written!Clap
ShikhaKhushi IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Brilliant!

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Crazy4Sobti IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 10:42pm | IP Logged

I am loving these small doses of ranting and venting of what went wrong and what should or could have happened because they echo my own raving.

If not every occasion, on the night of their marriage or on the night when Anjali tries to harm her child and Arnav yells at Khushi, blames her for coming his life and spoiling his sister's life. End of the day she is a human and can take only so much of pushing up the wall by everybody around her so she had to react but alas she didn't. 

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march2011 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 1:56am | IP Logged
wow thats a powerful one...love that

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Primmadonna Groupbie
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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 10:06am | IP Logged
so powerful!

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mistyrains IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 7:26am | IP Logged
All the three OSs are so brilliantly written. The first one was so powerful, the dialogues and it left me teary-eyed. The second one emanated a hopelessness , excruciating sadness, sadistically so, but it was beautiful. And the last one, I loved the most I think because Khushi fought back. That is always a delight to read! :D Do PM me when you write more, if possible. Thanks! :D

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 02 August 2013 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Loved all three OS's ... 
made us get a glimpse on how Khushi could have reacted otherwise ... 
Loved this Khushi ... at least she voices her opinion ... 

Thanks ... 

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