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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 12:32am | IP Logged
Jeeez u r brilliant..

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
Loved it but it left me confused a little
If you can clarify it for me via pm???
Please

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 10:33am | IP Logged
#1 Lucid Fall.

I'm so proud of Khushi.
How I wish she had been exactly like this (instead of a goofy doormat) in the show!

"Walking Contradiction, the very definition of double standards.. ". How True!

It delves deep into the psychology of both Arnav and Khushi.

Arnav's reaction was at first surprising. But then, every person has their own set of defense mechanism.

I just loved, loved the last line-
"He laughed because he knew if he stopped, he would cry..."

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 10:49am | IP Logged
# Too late, too late.

"He was like a thunderstorm. Impossible to ignore. Dazzling as he viciously destructed. She could count his fissures too."

"He had disappeared from her memories.. slowly like baby's teeth."

I want to ask only one question, how can you write such beautiful metaphors?

The cynicism of Khushi that reflects while she talked about Arnav fascinates me to no end!

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 11:21am | IP Logged
#3 Jar of Hearts.

This is the perfect thing which Khushi should have done in the show.

Funny, how Arnav, known for his mercurial temper and anger, couldn't do anything before Khushi's anger.

Khushi's retorts were too good.

".. f**king poolside."
Khushi sweared. That was fresh.

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Posted: 28 September 2013 at 11:37pm | IP Logged

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Edited by -Delilah- - 09 October 2013 at 8:22pm

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Posted: 29 September 2013 at 1:05am | IP Logged
BRILLIANT...
Beautiful portrayal of her pain n emotions...
amaxnggg writing dear...
thnxxx a lot 4 pm...
n
All the best for ur exams Smile...

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Posted: 29 September 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Love alone isn't enough.
He might be her soul mate but who said living with soul mates is easy.
He's killing her bit by bit.
And finally she realizes that it will do no good to anyone if she continued this.

Letting go is important.
Glad to see Khushi doing it to release her pain.


Edited by IronButterfly - 30 September 2013 at 12:24am

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