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katunkka Senior Member
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Love.this song and the way you waved a tale around it. Amazing I always wanted to see khushi act like arnav and show her inner rage. This is very satisfying.

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ranogill IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:25am | IP Logged
way to go khushi 

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ajoop IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:38am | IP Logged
amazing
loved it Clap

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incarnadine IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged

Beautifully written D! :)

I can't help wishing that a similar scene was shown in the show. Khushi didn't get the chance to vent her anger out. She did scream at Arnav that night, but then it sunk into oblivion. It wasn't re-visited ever again.

If only..

Thank you for this piece! I loved it! :)

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soppy Senior Member
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 11:55am | IP Logged
This was something!...in all this time i dont think a scene quite like this has been written
You should definitely write a redemption track!...god knows we cant get enough of those!
Id love to read your version of it
Oh and please update smooth talking stanger fast!

Edited by soppy - 20 July 2013 at 11:57am

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Pavina Senior Member
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
How do u mange to convey so much emtn in a sinle piece of writin...its briiliant...
I remeber durin marrige night i felt so sry for khushi since arnav was acting as emotionless beast..i so wis khushi wont tolerat all dis n wil stnd agnst him..but then her way of geetin him was difn...this os jus made me feel so nice...if arnav nac make a scene so can khushi...y wil c stay in poolside..she gave him the way he understood...jus a lovely os...i mean its beyond words for me to say nythin...i jus loved it...

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IronButterfly IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Her anguish and turmoil came out very well.

Good job.

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chavvi16 IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
wow now thats something she could have done
and this would show what it means to be in this marriage with him
man hats off to you for this

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