Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant D!
I just finished reading Love was... and now you have given us this piece, you definitely showcased what I said earlier about your talent and versatility!
Too little too late indeed, your descriptive portrayal of Khushi's emotions was fantastic. Forget a redemption track the show didn't even cover a proper apology & groveling other than one little scene somewhere prior to the wedding with all the rituals and customs. There was no remorse and proper Wooing track and still Khushi forgave him so easily. *sighs I am rambling aren't I, well your update had a massive impact and I am floored!
PS. Loved your PM, you are adorable no wonder you manage to come up with the very witty and cute diary entries for DFS! Good luck with College, do keep your readers entertained whenever you get a chance.🤗
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