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Jodhaa-Jalal OS: Princess of my dreams

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Hey guys enjoy my first OS... Plzz ignor spellings and grammar
Its in hinglish...(english + hindi) Wink

Shehenshah Jalal is planning to attack Aamer...
Bairam Khan: Kya socha hai Jalal aapne... Inn Rajputon par hamla karne ke bare mein...
Jalal: Khan baba aap hi ki seekh hai Dushman par hamla karne se pehle unke baare mein
puri jankari hona jaroori hai... Hum Aamer jayenge... Bhes badalkar (disguise)
Unnki har ek baat janege...
Bairam Khan:Kab??
Jalal:Ganngor utsav par... (and his evil smile) kal...

Scene changes to next morning...
Jalal enters Aamer... Just looking handsome in Rajputana bhes...he is in market..
He however manages to enter palace... And wins trust of King Bharmal
King makes him Jodhaa's bodyguard!!
Embarrassed He sees Princess Of Aamer Jodhaa first time and losts in her...
Jodhaa asks her father about her new guard her father says: he is really a good worrior
dont worry my princess
Jalal overhears dis convo. And smirks...
He says in mind.. "Jodhaa tum sirf hamari milkiyat ho sirf hamari"!!Shocked

But faith has stored something else for them..

In time of few days Jodhaa catches Jalal... She comes to know that
he is in Palace bcoz of some bad intentions... But still she is unaware about his fact...

She puts him in Karawas...the jail of Aamer...

Next day Jodhaa is getting ready in her kaksh... Alone..as her fiancee Prince Suryabhan is comming 2 meet her
She is wearing her red bangles... Suddenly Jalal comes from backside and whispers in her ear.."Agli mulkat bahut jald hogi...She turns but sees no one... A sainik comes running from behind and tells her to come with him... Jodhaa runs towards the Jail...
The cell where Jalal was kaid was broken...

There is something written on floor with blood..
"Agli mulkat jung mein hogi
       -Jalalluddin Mohd."
Jodhaa shocks...Jalal roxx!! Clap

Edited by -SulBalaLove- - 23 June 2013 at 5:29am

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Well my reaction hawww!!! ROFL
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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 10:30am | IP Logged
ufff ending tau bus awsum thi :D i was lyk omg!!
but superb!!!!
plzz continue soon id luv to read more of it Smile

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Jalal hugged Jodha from back ? Shocked Confused Stern Smile Blushing 
Amazing ! ROFL
Please continue ! 

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Ending was indeed good and dramatic Thumbs Up
But the hugging jodha from back and vanishing so quickly was LOL
what is jalal btw?? A vampire?? Shocked ROFL
Do write more..Smile

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
OMGi loved it!u inspired me and now I'm going to wire an os or ff
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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Wow it was awesome. 2nd ss. Please update soon. We have entire sunday  and I'm really bored. 
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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Nysh Nysh!!! Liked it!

But SulBala :p

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