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Os Vrushan : Kiss Sequence (part 2 updated) (Page 6)

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Awesome os

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Cute os. :) I loved the fact that both vrushan have feelings for each lther and got fidgety while doing the scene. Really well described feelings..Please continue it and give a proper ending with uh maybe confession? :)

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by medhasarkar

divya----i liked the writing itself and the concept of actors feeling awkward----

but are you sure that doing this stuff with actual actors is good? i mean---this may not be looked upon as very decent by mods by dragging actual sctors into it?

anyway, you are my buddy and i dont wanna see ya in trouble.

lovec your writing though.

love---medha


hmmm may b ur right...ill take dat into consideration next tym... Smile sorry...i did nt realize it before.. Unhappy
nywaz thank u.Smile

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swaron9113

I editd my cment on pg-1.

Aj he deep di ke speech suna to socha unres kr dun ni to tm logo ne likhna chod dia to mere band bj jayage.

@deep di-was kidding don't be seriour. Big smile

tubhi na Sneha... LOL nywaz  i read ur comment...thank u... Big smile

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@all : thank u for ur comments... Big smile
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
lovely os divya 
really liked vrushan pov 
plz continue this os n update the 2nd part also plz
thanx for d pm '
do continue ...it

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:06am | IP Logged
thank u...Smile
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:08am | IP Logged

hey swthrt..r u updating??Embarrassed

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