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That was so well written, loved both the parts.
One of the highlights and best things about your writing is the way you synchronize the emotions with body language. As a reader this makes visualizing the story and characters very easy.
Arnav was man of few words and didn't know how to give words his emotions and was like a caged lion when was he was overwhelmed with emotions and most of the times it was his body, his hands and his eyes that spoke. His "sorry", "stay" and "Please" said so many things that he wanted to say. The love he had for Khushi, the guilt of not trusting her, remorse of putting her through pain, fear of losing her and void that will be left in his life after she leaves.Glad Khushi stood her ground though she was in as much pain as Arnav she was as much a loser as Arnav it was important that she left to redeem her lost pride and individuality.
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