Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon


Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

~Bad Deal Series~ (TS) by Krani (Page 5)

Arshinme Groupbie

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
That was heart wrenching... Esp the way Arnav pleads Khushi to stay...I can see it in front of my eyes...

The way u express their emotions in a subtle yet strong way is remarkable..

Sorry I don't comment often but that does not mean that I don't enjoy ur work

Edited by Arshinme - 23 June 2013 at 9:43am

robinhood008 Goldie

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
That was an amazinggg piece of work

Had tears in my eyes all along the story
I relli didn't who was wrong or right

Your an exceptional writer!!
libbyferns Groupbie

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 3:02am | IP Logged
So beautifully written. First one had so  much anger and aggression while the second had so much  remorse and resolute with hardy any dialogues, just sorry and stay said with so much intensity, it just gave me goosebumps. And then the kiss and finally sleeping together for the last time said it all. Just awesome. Great work.
Amti4u IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Woww... a new story from your side... loved it...Smile
Swati_ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged
This was very beautiful Krani...very beautiful...
This TS brought back the mrmories of IPK which i cherish...
I wish the CV'S could learn a thing or two from the FF writers on people write so well and stick to the main plot that it just leaves me craving for more...

Coming to the story...
I really really felt bad for Arnav...
His insecurities, his fears , his love, his jealousy all made him trust Shyam...
Yes ofcourse he did it for his Di...but i have always felt that he was angry with Khushi for loving another man...
I absolutely liked the fact that Khushi did not compromise on her self respect and decided to leave...

Second part was very beautiful...the way only words spoken were 'Stay' and 'Sorry' ...yet they conveyed so many emotions...
For me the story did not end here...i would like to think that though Khushi left him later they united...
I cant imagine either of them without the other...

Loving your stories Krani...
Update your FF soon...
Take care...

Edited by Swati_ - 23 June 2013 at 4:12am
inocence Senior Member

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Oh it was so beautiful...:')
shubhadask Goldie

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 5:31am | IP Logged
What a beautiful story !!!
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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 7:07am | IP Logged
That was beautiful!!!!!!!!!

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