~Bad Deal Series~ (TS) by Krani - Page 3 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing...tis has potential to become a SS :)

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Ananya

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Posted: 10 years ago

This. This was the reason why I fell in love with your writing

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Posted: 10 years ago

i applaud your khushi for holding on to her self respect. 👏

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pink_kitten

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Posted: 10 years ago

So beautiful.

Sad it was their last night together but it was just so gracefully written that it filled it all in:D

Thanks for the brilliant read.

Take care.

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hk16

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is a stong Kushi , look forward to see how this story develops

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akaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

That was a bad deal.

Khushi said it all. Liked the strong & determined Khushi.

A beautiful ending.

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OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very beautifully written.

Though I feel what ever Arnav does is less to make Khushi stay. His few words will not make a difference.

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leanne_1983

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Posted: 10 years ago

It was beautiful. Loved it. I felt so sad though :'(

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Arshinme

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Posted: 10 years ago

That was heart wrenching... Esp the way Arnav pleads Khushi to stay...I can see it in front of my eyes...

The way u express their emotions in a subtle yet strong way is remarkable..

Sorry I don't comment often but that does not mean that I don't enjoy ur work

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robinhood008

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Posted: 10 years ago

That was an amazinggg piece of work

Had tears in my eyes all along the story
I relli didn't who was wrong or right

Your an exceptional writer!!

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