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ArHi SS: Never Healing Wounds *Chapter 11* Updated!! 14/02 (Page 90)

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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RizArshi

It was a wonderful update. Loved the way you have described the gradual changes in both Arnav and Khushi and the story of Arnav's falling in love with Khushi once again. I would love to know what is going on inside Khushi's mind. Thanks for the PM and wish you a very happy new year :)

Thank u so much :)
U will definitely get to know what is going on in Khushi's mind.

Originally posted by Japonica

This is a super story! You've built up the suspense and the remorse so well and brought them together by bringing in the 3 Mallicks, that was a clever stroke of narrative technique..
Really glad i came upon it by chance. Look forward to the unravelling of the past and hopefully the healing of all the wounds everyone in this story has been suffering from since the first blow, whatever it was that lies in Arnav's past , despite the title of the story! May be it will be that bothkhushi and arnav will provide succour to the wounds of their pasts.

Thank u very much :)
Glad u read and liked the story.
Yes definitely...despite the title everything will end well. I prefer happy endingsBig smile
And like u said Arnav and Khushi will be eachother's aid.

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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sarthshru

loved the update dear..but afters o long !1
excited for next one..please b quiker !!

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I'm trying my best to update as soon as I can.

Originally posted by gangsu

beautiful ff Smile

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Originally posted by dialuvarshi

beautiful  update.glad u updated.khushi is out of out though not completely atleast a little.felt like crying reading khushi's pain and arnav 's pain.hpe our khushi comes back soon.waiting to read more.this time make it soon plsss

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Khushi will surely recover soon.

Originally posted by daisydee425

amazing

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by risha8

wonderful update

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Originally posted by yeshyeshna

awesome update
loved the way u described those 2 months & arnav's pain
he was so rude & mean to her
glad to know that payal told him about khushi pawning her bangles
he should regret more
waiting for next partSmile

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Originally posted by bs1224

Very emotional one 
Loved it 
Thanks for pm
Do update soon

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by renee.bee

Hi thnx for d pm
Awesome updt.
Arnav's POV ws really emotional as in how he saw Khushi's pain which ws a result of nt jus her past bt his actions which he justified to himself denyin his feelings for khushi.
Spl his actions reg the releasin the video tapes and the Diwali night had a lastin damage on her.
Though she still fought all tht n loved him to the core.

As much as I hate Anjali its Arnav who wud threaten to leave the house over comments by nani reg Lavanya Suddenly turned spineless when it came to stand up for Khushi when his sis demanded to throw her out.
How ungrateful ws he or how little he thought of Khushi tht he ws willin to throw her out even after she risked her life n brought him safe while his precious DI even after knwin the facts pretended to nt understand n still support tht criminal husband of hers.

Its nt fair tht It wud take Khushi to suffer so much for Arnav to repent n redeem himself .
How easily he forgave Anjali by a mere sorry. He shud have told her the day Khushi is well n her odld self will I consider forgivin you.
Dint he realize if Khushi is talkin to her its ju tht she's pretendin to nt remember or b nice to everyone as she alwys wnted to keep other's happy.

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Yes Arnav's past actions have definitely caused Khushi a lot of pain. And though we didn't get any proper redemption in the show we could still feel that Arnav was in pain too every time he hurt her.
That doesn't really justify his actions but that is why he was ASR right? People like him find it difficult to express their feelings, be it happiness or sadness or pain and it is for their loved ones to see through their outer facade and understand their emotions.
I know it was really unjustified how he took her for granted and didn't stand up to support her. But I feel it was required to to put a full stop to everybody's accusations. Khushi was a person who didn't think twice before spreading happiness and kept her sadness stuffed within herself and for everyone to see what lies behind the happy-go-lucky facade this was needed. Losing something sometimes gains a lot of things.
And while Khushi is suffering it is not only she who is going through the pain. Every member is more or less going through a lot of things. As for Anjali, she too is suffering. She is pregnant with the child of a man who is nothing sort of a scumbag. And to get to know his reality isn't that a huge punishment for a woman. She has hurt Khushi. Agreed. But offence is the best defence right? Any woman in her place would hv more or less done the same.
Moreover Anjali's characterization in the show was of a weak and delusional woman and I've tried to stick to thatLOL

Arnav shouldn't have forgiven Anjali. I for one think its not possible to keep Arnav-Anjali apart for a long time. Anjali is a mother figure to Arnav, his only support even before Khushi came to his life. He may feel angry upon her for some of her deeds but he can't hate her coz the past difficulties in their lives hv made their bond much stronger. And to think of it, Arnav and Anjali both treated Khushi the same way. If Anjali accused Khushi for 6 minutes, Arnav had been doing the same for almost a year. So if he can find himself worthy of being with Khushi despite his own misdeeds then why not the same for Anjali.

I hope that gave u an insight as to how I have perceived the characters.


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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asha_mehta

Update waa too good.
Loved how you have narrated the whole part...describing everyones role and emotions in helping khushi.
Hope that arnavs efforts will soon bring her back
Continue soon

Thank u so much :)

Originally posted by swetha10

Awesome update...
hmm khushi is all fine.. though not being the old khushi..
liked the changed arnav..
continue soon

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Originally posted by jas0308

amazing update!
so khushi has changed after, the session.. but glad she wasn't harm!
felt bad for arnav... poor guy... hate himself more than anything... hope he will have his 'khushi' soon :D
hmm... there IS surely some link between these all malliks..
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Yes he will get his Khushi real soon.
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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..Neha..

So emotional story...
Though i feel bad for the pain arnav is feeling, its necessary too. Its only coz of him that Khushi is in this state...
Love Payal standing up for her sister...
Arman-khushi's bond is also nicely portrayed..
What's with past of Arnav? Why subhadraleft them? And now why is she back?
What phone call was nani thinking about while talking with subhadra on phone & calling her back?
I'm sure there's some connection between Arman & subhadra.. but what?
Glad Khushi is improving gradually...
Ufff... soo much mysteries..Confused
It can only be unveiled by ur updates...
So update fast..Wink
And plz PM me... Big smile

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Hahahaha sure there are so many mysteries...which will be unveiled very soon. Till then keep thinking Wink
Will surely PM u.

Originally posted by tinsel

Khushi is still recovering,hope she gets well soon. 
I have a weird feeling that the Maliks are all related somehow.
Emotional update.

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 12:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by i_luv_abhiya

Beautiful update.

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Originally posted by angeldream14

loved it
when u love someone u can never hate them, its just that u r mad n angry with them

hope the surprise doesn't trigger wrong affect

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Yup true said!

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Originally posted by Arnav1Khushi

Nice work. Enjoyed the update

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Posted: 08 February 2014 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arshifan4life

Read all the parts in one go loved it do pm me plz

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Will PM u for sure.

Originally posted by Happytwinkle

just read this story in one go...completely in love with it...loved the way you portray the characters and their emotions...m speechless...beautiful updates...plz pm me for your updates plz

Thank u so much :)
Will defo PM u.

Originally posted by manikka

beautiful part...

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Originally posted by WanieA

hi, read all the chapters in one go...pls update soon... amazing work.

Thank u :)

Originally posted by momai14

Awesome dear...loved d updates

Thanks a lot :)

Originally posted by Angellic_doll

hi i read this now.\it is superb. pls continue soon and also pm me.

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