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ArHi SS: Never Healing Wounds *Chapter 11* Updated!! 14/02 (Page 32)

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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 4:44am | IP Logged
nice update. But it was short.


You are right, Payal had a value. But then I have mixed feelings for her. I never felt she was a good sister. She was a fun sister to hang out with, strict and cozy with Kushi. But then she was not there for Kushi all the times.

Only once I had felt proud of her, it was when she yelled at Arnav when he brought a unconscious Kushi home and if I remember correct, back then she was a good character. But I still don't understand why she never went out to find work like Kushi. She must be more educated than Kushi as she is elder but she just sat at home while Kushi had to battle THE ASR!

I find such loop holes in her character and later as you said, they spoiled her character and portrayed her selfish and with no love to Kushi or concern for her, that I completely lost my feelings for her.

Many stories here to portrayed her with strong hate that I was swayed. So when I read your positive approach to her I somehow can't accept her. Maybe it will take time. Let me see if you can change my opinion!!!

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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 4:51am | IP Logged
simply fabulous.loved it.

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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 5:11am | IP Logged
nice update.hope khushi recovers sooon.this happened before???????when????in her childhood??????

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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 6:36am | IP Logged
love dthe update so heart warming ..
had khushi gone into shck due to shyam ??/

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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
lovely update 
sister relationship which lost somewhere in show u bring it back, hug u for this 


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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
love the way payal is portrayed

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Posted: 30 July 2013 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Awesome Update...
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part...
Update Soon...
Thanks 4 d PM...

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Posted: 01 August 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lalaland222

Loved it. ^_^ 
Update the next soon doll. :D 

Thank uEmbarrassed

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