This is a super story! You've built up the suspense and the remorse so well and brought them together by bringing in the 3 Mallicks, that was a clever stroke of narrative technique..
Really glad i came upon it by chance. Look forward to the unravelling of the past and hopefully the healing of all the wounds everyone in this story has been suffering from since the first blow, whatever it was that lies in Arnav's past , despite the title of the story! May be it will be that bothkhushi and arnav will provide succour to the wounds of their pasts.
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