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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Wow. . .that was awsm.
Arnav asked her for a dance, wow . . .waiting fr the nxt update

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 8:27am | IP Logged
he still gets that haunted feeling...
if he knew the truth he would have gone to her...*sigh*
both are trying to achieve their best for their fathers ..but will they forgive them when they remember what they did...
he totally mesmerized by her presence...
jealous and anger...with one comment or gesture from others to her...
fantastic update Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap
update the next soon dearBig smile

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Thnx for d pm. 

Nice updt.

Arshi drawn to each other.

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dalmuthuya

Ohmygod, they met after 2 years!!! Seriously this chapter has to be my favourite because I felt like now the battle is about commence with Arhi. Arnav's confusing jealousy towards Khushi, his intense gaze never leaving her. Khushi's desires arising as well. I love the way their eyes just meet and it's magic. I literally felt the magic in your words describing that moment. You perfectly flowed the words in to the scene. It was absolutely brilliant! 

Now I am getting so excited because the story is about falling in love over again and remembering. Do you know what that means? We get a confused, angry, jealous Arnav, along with a confused, innocent, conflicted Khushi. And this only gives us more intense scenes with them, which I cannot wait for! 

Overall amazing chapter and I cannot wait any longer for the next! UPDATE! 

PS: I am awestruck with these lines.. Amazing imagery. 

'A glaze of dark shadows encompassed the area. Droplets of a sticky liquidy substance dripped to the ground.
Two figures stood above a pool of blood.' 

Omg!!! Big smile Yaar thank you sooo much for such an amazing response!!! Hug Glad you enjoyed this update!! SmileSmileSmile 

I was truly nervous about this chapter!!! The gap of two years was a big risk!! And I took a lot to write this chapter!! Took me forever to decide what to include and what to not include!!! Definitely this has been my most favorite chapter too!!! SmileSmile

LOL yup this is indeed an intense Arshi love story!!! So there will be intense scenes too!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Although I'm not sure how soon they will be. LOLLOL 

LOL about when to update...LOLLOLLOL let's see when!! I'm confused about what to write in the next one!! I have a rough idea now though. Big smile Will try my best to update asap!! Big smile 

Thanks for reading & loving the update yaar!!! You are my most amazing & rocking reader!!! Hug


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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by honey-sweety

Well Written update  with beautiful pictures..

 

Awww thanks!!! Glad you enjoyed the update as well as the pictures!! Smile 
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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by summaiyasayed

superb updt

Thanks Smile I'm glad you enjoyed reading Ch 10. I'll try updating Ch 11 soon!! Smile
arshi_lover1 Senior Member
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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
Not another cliffhanger! Plzzz continue soon!

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Well written, i think story is going to take complete U-turn, i feel some freshness in the plot, newaz eagerly waiting 4 arshi romance, really nice, update soon...

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