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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cindistan

Hi, just came across this FF and read out all five updates and loved itClap...would love to read more...pls do accept my buddy request and PM me as and when you update...

keep up the good work.


Thx Smile Glad u enjoyed reading my ff so far. I will try updating the next chapter soon. Smile And will pm u Smile

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 8:50pm | IP Logged

Chapter 1

Loving the suspense Heens.  :) Don't stop no matter how many comments.

On to the chapter..

My favorite scene was where Yash was freaking out at the doctor. That was such ASR trait, which I loved because it was a father like son moment.

Another thing what I did not see coming is the marriage deal. When I first read the proglouge I wondered why no one was there for their marriage- well now I know. So the family doesn't know they got married? I wonder why the secret. 

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 8:56pm | IP Logged

Chapter 2

LOL Okay I don't know why Yash's and Shashi's confrontation was hella funny. Picturing it made me laugh and I know it's intense, but when ever dads fight I find it funny. Maybe it's just me. You know I am an odd one.

Shit, Khushi isn't doing good.. Oh no, is she gonna lose her memory? Shashi isn't going to be one happy camper that's for sure..

Frankly speaking though I think in a fight Yash would win. He seems the more bad ass type. He is my favorite to be honest as of right now. Reminds me of ASR lol 

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Chapter 3

Well I was way off about Khushi's memory loss. Did Arhi hate each other before? Because Arnav yelling out about a freak ruining stuff.. and then 'Khushi my love..' I am gonna guess there's a huge back story, as usual.

Khushi screaming too? Heens you have a lot to unfold here.

I want to guess and say this 'unknown' person is Shyam, but would that  be too obvious? Or do you want me to think it's obvious so that I would not think that, then you will make it him and I will be wrong. AH HA. I am on to you.

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 9:25pm | IP Logged

Chapter 4

NK? Khushi and NK? Another story to be unfolded. Khushi and Arnav are both a-wall, but was Khushi speaking of NK, convincing regarding Arhi marrying?

Oh my, Arhi made eye contact. Usually this consists of a lot of BAMS and fire. 

PS: Yash is still my favorite. Lol I do not know why, but his character is grey and they're always interesting. 

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dalmuthuya

Chapter 1


Loving the suspense Heens.
:) Don't stop no matter how many comments.


On to the chapter..


My favorite scene was where Yash was freaking out at the
doctor. That was such ASR trait, which I loved because it was a father like son
moment.


Another thing what I did not see coming is the marriage
deal. When I first read the proglouge I wondered why no one was there for their
marriage- well now I know. So the family doesn't know they got married? I
wonder why the secret.




Thx yaar Smile I wont stop writing. Yes Yash & Asr do have similar triats at times. The reason the marriage was tht way is yet to be unfolded later on in this ff. Glad ur enjoying my ff yaar!! Thx for the awesome feedback. Smile

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dalmuthuya

Chapter 2


LOL Okay I don't know why Yash's and Shashi's confrontation
was hella funny. Picturing it made me laugh and I know it's intense, but when
ever dads fight I find it funny. Maybe it's just me. You know I am an odd one.


Shit, Khushi isn't doing good.. Oh no, is she gonna lose her
memory? Shashi isn't going to be one happy camper that's for sure..


Frankly speaking though I think in a fight Yash would win.
He seems the more bad ass type. He is my favorite to be honest as of right now.
Reminds me of ASR lol




Lolzzz Yosh!!! Love ur feedback. Yeah the dads dont get along & why will again be unfolded later in this ff. Smile

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Posted: 11 July 2013 at 9:32pm | IP Logged

Chapter 5

Something happened to my chest at this moment..

'Meanwhile Khushi sat in her wheelchair confused. Her heart started racing when she saw the stranger in front of her screaming her name. Her concern for this stranger seem to have grow when she saw them taking him back inside after giving him that shot.'

 

Oh man, the confusion.. I imagined her fragile body, pale, just trying to figure out why this stranger was screaming, and why were her reactions so intense inside.

So far from what I've got in this story is that it has the theme of Romeo and Juliet, except it isn't stupid. Just the feeling that the families hate each other, and probably Arhi did too, until they fell in love. So since the family were being immature idiots, they decided to go ahead and get married. Alas, this happened, but there's a lot in the past to disclosed.

Waiting Heens so you better get yo SORRY LIL ASS AND UPDATE SOON. After you get better that is. This is brilliant and I am hooked. 

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