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MJ_K2 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
vow. arnav was in ashram.. hope arhi cums together.

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Arshicrazee Senior Member

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
God...Sad...So so so sad..Tragic even..Everything fell apart..Arnav's anger really did a good job..And Khushi..I can see her point..I always thought it was really really unfair of Arnav to dominate her like that.I hated him even..For making her do everything as per his wish..As if she doesn't own anything about her.She let him decide everything..And believe me..I sooo hated him for that.
Seeing Arnav's mental turmoils today..I assume he never realized it..That he was snatching away her freedom to decide things on her own.He did it unknowingly.He loved her and trusted her love.It was evident from the flash back.He might be insecure..But he do trust her.And i guess he would have never dominated her in this way if she discussed this with him earlier,Showing her discomfort..And i do feel bad for him.Coz he never actually realized what he was doing to her.It happens in love..Still..She should have told him earlier..It might have angered him for some time.But he would have understood.Arnav is not that heartless a person..If he was such a beast he would have made her his that day itself.But he didn't.He values her.Her beliefs..A man who wanted physical relation only after their marriage because he knew his partner would be uneasy otherwise.It shows he values her soo much.Yet it doesn't give him the rights to own her though.She is a human being..She too have feelings.And her own rights.Freedom.He snatched them away..Unknowingly..His posessiveness and anger taking the best of him.That was unbearable..For any human being.Khushi suffered only because of her love for him was unconditional.Still it doesn't give him any excuses..Or makes him right.
And it was Very very wrong on Khushi to accuse him about his mother.Arnav did wrong. Really wrong..Out of his posessiveness and Anger.But Khushi knows him.Knows that how much it hurts him when talking about his parents.It was so wrong on her side to accuse someone on his weak point .Arnav did terrible things.May be he thought his love was enough for her and nothing could overpower his love.He thought she would be happy with whatever he does.And That..Was selfish..Really selfish. Or may be he never loved anyone so that he thought he could own a person whom he loves.This comes from an insecurity feeling..a fear of losing.Arnav told what he shouldn't have..Only because he wanted to keep her with him.It was so wrong and selfish .To play with their emotions like that..Still I do pity him..He never realized what he was doing.But what he said to Khushi about her being with him for money..Was gross..Unforgivable.He could have shouted at her.But this was over the top.Any girl with self respect can't tolerate such thing.Anger doesn't give him excuses everytime.He should have learned to control it.Having a tragic past doesn't give you the rights to destroy your present and future..And Arnav exactly did that.
The response from their families is understandable.Everyone except for Arnav knew how much he was dominating her.How much she was giving away for him.So i really dont find any reasons to blame them.All of them never knew the Arnav inside the ASR.It was Arnav's fault though.However insecure he might feep..He should have shown them a little more love and care rather than bottling it all up in his heart..
The last part.His mother's death..I knew it from the moment he gone missing that he was with her.I can see him accepting his mistake.He is changing i guess.Now that everything is out in light..He knows what he had done.I guess all this chapter is a hint for a bright tomarrow.Moulding of a new Arnav.
Sheetal and her words..Another secret lies between them..I really do wonder what it is..
And finally..this is the longest comment i have ever written in IF.And the credit goes to you..You pulled it off in such a way that i felt it in each cell of my body while reading.The emotional beautifully portyrayed..Well done..Hats off for that..It really takes a lot of effort to pull it off like this.I really appreciate you for that..Waiting for the next chapter...

Edited by Arshicrazee - 22 July 2013 at 12:30pm

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nnsunn Goldie

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Amazing update.
Wat was that? It was heartbreaking to see arshi fighting and khushi leaving arnav. Arnav was with his mother for 2 weeks, thats great. Wonder whether arshi wil ever be together.

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Ashavi Goldie

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
so finally Arnav came out of ASR...ASR-Khushi conversation was very emotional one...
hope Arnav persists even after his mother's death...
update soon...

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sutapasarbabhom IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Very imotional update lov evry part but i want to thanx u that arnav was with his mother at her last time n forgiv her n gv her peace n this hapen becoz of kushi i wish now arnav change m crying at last part thanx

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star_fan1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Nice but sad update
Arnav and Khushi are not together
I know Arnav's anger was very bad and KHushi had limit to take it
But can't see them separate
It's nice that Arnav had managed to back off that day
Mat be his this good quality make Garima realize that he is not bad at heart
Only his fate make him this way rude
Waiting for next update
Plz make them together soon can't see them separate
Plz continue it soon

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KSG_luv IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
This was the most saddest update ever..poor Arnav..
I kinda didnt like khushi in this update of all the people she should have understood his inner turmoil..

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nimsnannu Senior Member

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Posted: 22 July 2013 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
good one... Thans 4 clearing the confusion...
But y all this happened???? Can't see them seperate & in pain...
Happy that atlast he came to his mother before she passed away...
But really scared abt their future...
Waiting to know wat'll happen???
Continue soon...

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