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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Hi !
I have written before 3 days my first OS.
You people can forget this little OS Clap.

I have got now 2 OS and you people can vote which one is better .
The names are "Our love is impossible" and "Tears of love".
You can write in the commentars which is better.
I will continued the winner
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Our love is impossible:

Zoya runs away to her bedroom. She takes off her Nikaah dress and packed it  into her suitcase.
She packed all her things in the suitcase and buys a ticket to Havanna on her iPad. The plan will starts in 2 days.

Asad had observed what Zoya does. He was very confused to see what Zoya does. He thinks:,, Why
Zoya wants to buy a ticket to Havanna ?" He buys a ticket to Havanna in the same plane, too. Asad
sits 2 seats behind Zoya. He has to wear a mask.

As Zoya wants to sleep in her bed she  was crying. She says quiet :,, Why must Asad do this to me ? Why ?"

Asad was very sad for her and he doesnt know what is going up.
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Tears of love:

As Asad was alone he goes to his bedroom, but there was someone in his bed.
Asad has carefully removed the blanket and Zoya was laid there with blood.
Asad was very shocked and was calling everbody.

His mom comes first and asks Asad what is going on and why Zoya is laid in Asads bed.
He said she is bleeding, but her pulse is still active and slowly.
They called the ambulance and Asad goes with Zoya there,too.

In the hospital was it very dark because it was 12 o clock.
Asad waits there very long time.
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The stories are short because I must to know which story is better.

Hope one of the was good.

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 3:36am | IP Logged
continue soon

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akaswan

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 3:39am | IP Logged
sound interesting
plz update soon
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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 5:28am | IP Logged
interesting. Update soon pls
AsYa_4_ever Senior Member
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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Come on guys !
Which one is better ??
I must to now it !!
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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Both are good..but i prefer first one!! Second one seems to be a bit dark!!
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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Thanks arnav26 !

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i prefer 1st one

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