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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 5:01am | IP Logged


loved the story... very well written... lack of communication does stir the bad strings in a relation... but am happy that the story ended with a happy note leaving a smile on my face...

all the best for ur upcoming works... do pm me

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -lakshmi-



loved the story... very well written... lack of communication does stir the bad strings in a relation... but am happy that the story ended with a happy note leaving a smile on my face...

all the best for ur upcoming works... do pm me
 
Sry i dnt snd pms, i've given the link to my other work, u can bookmark it
 
 
Thanks a lot fr such great comments
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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jack-12

Originally posted by -lakshmi-



loved the story... very well written... lack of communication does stir the bad strings in a relation... but am happy that the story ended with a happy note leaving a smile on my face...

all the best for ur upcoming works... do pm me
 
Sry i dnt snd pms, i've given the link to my other work, u can bookmark it
 
 
Thanks a lot fr such great comments


ok ... no probs... will check itSmile
amita5 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Awesome os
all ends well for maan and geet
as they finally become parents to a boy

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 10:14am | IP Logged
beautiful OS.. loved it..

thnx for pmSmile

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Aww.! Superb OS.! 
Loved their realization and glad they finally rectified their mistakes.! 

Superb ending dear.  Thanks for the short yet so wonderful story Smile  
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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Amazing os

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Nice os. Did u write it first on madhu RK..i saw risabh written smwhr instead of maan.

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