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APON BOLA.... TU MERI LAILA

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Posted: 07 August 2006 at 1:25am | IP Logged

APON BOLA.........
        TU MERI LAILA....
The story  involves many characters, in the fic there is a girl whose name is manasvi, she is a girl full of life, wear jeans,and very out spoken   but the problem which she has is that , she believe that her father(mansen) dont care about her and he has no love for her daughter, where as other characters include sooraj , arjun and bhoomi, all three of them are pickpockets(thieves), now the story beomes spicy when this girl, manasvi meet these three guys(sooraj , manasvi,and bhoomi)
MORNING TIME
bhoomi:(playing with the money)
arjun:hey bhoomi aaj to badi khush nazar a rahi he
bhoomi:dekh nahin rehe, subha subha kya raqam haath mein aye he
arjun:bus eik teri kismat he achi he
sooraj:(entered into the room)nahin re arjun, apon ki kismat bhi buhat achi he
arjun:(confused)
anonymous:boss koi madam milne aye he
sooraj:madam.....
bhoomi:is waqt kaun ho sakta he
arjun:andar bulao
manasvi:(entered into the room)
sooraj:(looking at manasvi)aap...............
arjun:madam tujh ko apon logon se kya kaam
manasvi:mujhe tum logon se eik zaroori kaam he
bhoomi:madam hum kisi keh liye koi kaam nahin, hum log sirf apon waste kaam karta he
sooraj:nahin madam apko koi kaam he to bataye
bhoomi:(whisper in arjun's ear)yeh sooraj ko kya ho geya he re
arjun:apon ko toh samajh mein nahin a raha
manasvi:mujhe kidnapping karwani he
sooraj:(get afraid).....madam....kidnapp....ing
arjun:madam apon log aisa koi kaam nahin karta
sooraj:madam kidnapping.....hum to sirf logon ki jeben katteh he par kid...napping......kabhi nahin
manasvi:dekho mein tum logon ko achi khaasi raqam doon ge is ke
arjun:madam kuch bhi ho....
bhoomi:mere saat chalo
(convince sooraj and arjun)
sooraj:ok madam, hum tyar he par kidnapping kiski karwani he
manasvi:(get happy)tum logon ko meri kidnapping karni he
arjun:(drinking water, the glass got slipped)yeh aap kya bol rahi he
manasvi:dekho actually baat yeh he keh mere papa ko meri koi fikr nahin he,......................................................... ............................................................ ................................ mein dekhna chahti hoon keh kya kidnapp hone keh baad bhi woh mujhe yaad karey ge ya nahin ,tum logon ko mujhe kidnapp karke papa se achi khasi raqam mangni ho ge, understand, to kal tyar rehna(went)
arjun:baap re kya ladki he
sooraj:(smiling)
bhoomi:(laughing)
arjun:tu kyun has rahi he
bhoomi:tum idhar dekho ge to pata chale ga(pointing sooraj)
arjun:(look at sooraj)yaani humare sooraj bhaiya bhi.......(start laughing)
NEXT DAY AFTER THE KIDNAPPING OF MANASVI
bhoomi:madam apon ne tere daddy ko phone kardiya he, leken...................................
manasvi:kya......
bhoomi:tere daddy meeting mein the, islye unhon ne phone attend nahin kiya, tere daddy ka assistant tha, apon ne filhal usse baat nahin ki, darasal  apon log direct baat karne ka aadi he
arjun:(entered the room with carrying rope)chalo madam tyar ho jao aur kurse par beth jao
manasvi:(confused)
arjun:(start wrapping rope arond her)
manasvi:yeh tum log mujhe rase se kyun bandh rehe ho
arjun:madam apon tere upar bharosa nahin kar sakta
manasvi:what?
sooraj:(looking at manasvi and smiling)
AFTER ONE HOUR
sooraj and manasvi in a room
manasvi:suno
sooraj:aapne mujhe se kuch kaha
manasvi:nahin yahan bhut bethe hua he jin se mein baat kar rahe hoon, ofcorse tumse he keh rahi hoon
sooraj:je........
manasvi:dekho mein itni deer yahan faarigh nahin beth sakti, maine film dekhne he aur woh bhi sirf salman khan ki
sooraj:madam salu bhai ko dekhna he na, apon kisi salo bhi se kam  dekhta he
manasvi:(looking him with strange)salman kahan aur tum kahan,sari hui bhendi dekhte ho
sooraj:kya!
manasvi:(move face towards the opposite side)
AFTER SOMETIME
sooraj:(looking in the mirror with clean shave)
arjun:(singing song, pointing sooraj)tujhe dekha to yeh jana sanam.....................
bhoomi:(laughing)
sooraj:(look at both of them and went to manasvi)
manasvi:(watching movie)
sooraj:madam,
manasvi:(look at him,surprised)
sooraj:apon ab kaisa dekhta he
manasvi:(after a long pause, smile)ab tun bilkul...................................................... chele hua aloo ki tarh dekh rehe ho
sooraj:madam tum kya vegeterian ho jo bus tumhe logon ko dekh kar sabzian he yaad aati hein(went with disapponitment)
manasvi:(smiling)
AFTER ONE HOUR MANASVI SITTING BETWEEN ARJUN AND BHOOMI
arjun:bhoomi tum aaj buhat achi lag rahi ho
bhoomi:such mein
arjun:lo kabhi humne tere se jhut bola he
bhoomi:(smiling)nahin re
arjun:aaj hum donon chaley
manasvi:(with frustration)excuse me! stop talking this nonscence
bhoomi:(suddenly)madam apon ko yeh angreezi yani"english" nahin aati, isliye apon se is bhasha mein baat mat kiya kar
arjun:to bhoomi chaley
bhoomi:kahan
arjun:wahi jahan rani aur abhishek gaye the
bhoomi:(went into dream, where arjun and bhoomi dancing on song "chup chup ke"
AFTER ONE HOUR
sooraj sitting with manasvi
sooraj:maine tere daddy ko phone kar diya he
manasvi:(serious)
sooraj:tere daddy buhat pareshan ho geya tha
manasvi:zaroor jub paise mange hon ge to pareshan hua honge
sooraj:nahin re madam, unhon ne to balke kahan ke hum jitni raqam mange ge woh dene keh liye tyar he
manasvi:(smiling with surprise)
sooraj:madam eik bat kaho
manasvi:haaaa
sooraj:yeh daddy log humse buhat pyar karta hota he par masla yeh he keh jis tarh maa apne jazbat ka izhar kar leti he, yeh daddy log nahin kar pata , agar yeh humay dant bhi dete he toh usme bhi unka pyar hota he, humay yeh samajhna chaiye(went)
manasvi:(looking at sooraj)
AFTER THIS MANASVI CAME BACK HOME AND REALIZED THAT HER FATHER(MANSEN) LOVE HER LOT
after one month
manasvi:(on road, driving fastly, over taking, the policeman take her to the police station)
in the police station
policeman:saab yeh ladki road ko runway samajh kar gari hawai jahaz ki tarh chala rahi thi
sooraj:(on back side)madam kyun apne road ko runway kubse samajhna shura kardiya
manasvi:actually.................(shocked to see sooraj in police uniform)
sooraj:aap
manasvi:jeben katne walon ka police mein kya kaam
arjun:(entered the room in police uniform)sooraj!
manasvi:(shocked)
arjun:aap yahan par
manasvi:mujhe poochna chaiya he keh kya police walon ne pickpockets ko bharti karna shuru kardiya he
arjun:(smiling)
sooraj:miss manasvi actually hum eik mahine pehle eik secret mission par the humay kuch groups ko pakarna tha jiski wajah se humay.....aap samajh gae na
manasvi:oh! now i understand
bhoomi:(entered the room)sir may i come in
manasvi:(look at her)
sooraj:yeh come in
bhoomi:(entered the room)
manasvi:now i will not ask(smiling)
sooraj:(looking at manasvi)
manasvi:(pointing arjun and bhoomi)waise aap logon ki apas ki baatein to such thi na ya woh bhi..............
bhoomi:(shying)madam agle mahene humari shaadi he..........................
AFTER THIS ARJUN AND BHOOMI GOT MARRIED AND SOORAJ MANASVI GET ENGAGED
after six months
manasvi:(wearing pink frok)sooraj mein priety zinta lag rahi hoon na
sooraj:ha.........kahan priety zinta aur kahan.............. tum
manasvi:(get angry)
sooraj:are baba mera matlab tha keh tum jaisa khubsoorat to koi ho nahin sakta
manasvi:(get happy)
sooraj:(in low vice)waise priety zinta jaisa bhi koi nahin ho sakta
manasvi:tumne kuch kaha
sooraj:no.... no.....nothing
                           the end

 


 

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Posted: 07 August 2006 at 2:22am | IP Logged
wo!!! that was superb!! cool tapori lingo .......it was really fun to read Clap
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Posted: 07 August 2006 at 2:40am | IP Logged
That was just awesome, I loved it Clap . It was in tapori language, but so easy to read and follow, it flowed really well, I could just picture the entire thing..great job Clap
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Posted: 07 August 2006 at 2:41am | IP Logged
coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool!!!
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Posted: 07 August 2006 at 3:55am | IP Logged
nice fan fiction.ek dum mast likha,apon ko to bhai yeh fan fiction accha laga.
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Posted: 07 August 2006 at 4:49am | IP Logged
very niccccccccceeee Clap
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Posted: 07 August 2006 at 5:25am | IP Logged
coooooooooooooooooooooooooool!!!!!!!! Clap
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veryyyyyyyy nice

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