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Hello and Welcome back to me again!LOL

This is my 1st SS on MAYUR and of course 3rd story.Smile

Well due to constant spamming of Faria and of course her soulmate in spamming Shefali,Iam bound to start another story on MAYUR.Big smileLOL

Now my only request to my readers and of course to these spam queens that please please please don't force me for updates as I'll update once in a week.Please its an earnest request.Embarrassed

It will be a very emotional story,Iam clearing the fact at the beginning,so please later on don't cry.LOL

Ae Faru banner bana iska.Sirf Mayur ka mat banaana usme ek bachchi bhi daalna 2-3 saal ki


INDEX :-

CHAPTER - 1               PAGE - 1.
CHAPTER - 2               PAGE - 10.
CHAPTER - 3               PAGE - 16.
CHAPTER - 4               PAGE - 28.
CHAPTER - 5               PAGE - 34.
CHAPTER - 6               PAGE - 39.
CHAPTER - 7               PAGE - 46.
CHAPTER - 8               PAGE - 52.
CHAPTER - 9               PAGE - 57.
CHAPTER - 10              PAGE - 63.
CHAPTER - 11              PAGE - 71.
CHAPTER - 12              PAGE - 76.
CHAPTER - 13              PAGE - 82.
CHAPTER - 14              PAGE - 89.
LAST  CHAPTER & EPILOGUE               PAGE - 94.
Muskaan's message                            PAGE - 102.
Writer's note                                  PAGE - 103.

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CONCEPT :-

The story is about a childless couple and how one day their life changed when an orphan child knocks into their lives.From their how their lives take a U-Turn and how the child becomes an inseparable part of their life.


CHARACTER  SKETCH :- 

MAYANK  SHARMA :- He is a handsome lad of 30 and an engineer by profession.He is a very caring husband and loves his wife to the core of his heart.

NUPUR  MAYANK  SHARMA :- She is a young woman of 27 and wife of Mayank.She is a very caring and dutiful wife and loves her husband very much.

MUSKAAN :- She is a baby girl of 2 years.She is very cute and adorable and the cental character of this story.


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PROLOGUE :-
Mayank and Nupur are happiliy married couples.They were colleagues in their company and they had a love marriage.Their marriage completed 3 years.They had everything in their lives happiness,comfort and all the other necessary things to lead a comfortable life.But the only thing that was missing was the giggles of a child.They had no child.Nupur longed for a baby and always did prayers for a child.After a lot of prayers,God ultimately listened to their wish and soon within 1 year of their marriage,Nupur became pregnant.She resigned from her job.Everyone were very happy about the new member.Maynk and Nupur felt as if nothing was left unachiebed in their life.As time passed by,Mayank and Nupur often had a fight of whether it would be a baby boy or a baby girl.But as it is said that happiness is never long lasting,so also their happiness was smashed by someones evil eyes.In an accident,Nupur faced a miscarriage and the doctor confirmed that Nupur would never be able to concieve.This one news,destroyed Mayank and Nupur's life.Nupur became a lifeless statue.She didn't even cry on the news.Later on when Mayank asked,the doctor said that it was a baby girl.Mayank so wanted a baby girl,so he was too much heartbroken.Everyone tried to bring Nupur back to normal but she could not.Slowly slowly with Mayan's love and shock therapy,Nupur cried her heart out and her grief was washed away by her tears.Mayank then decided to move to Bangalore with a new job with Nupur,so that she could forget about the child.
                                                                                              Within one year,they slowly settled down in Bangalore and Nupur too became busy and devoted herself in her housewife duty.1 year later,one night,while returning from office,Mayank heard the cry of a child.It was heavily raining outside.He stopped his car and found a small baby of almost 2 years old was crying loudly inside the shade of a shop.Mayank was very shocked on seeing the baby alone.He thought for sometime and then took the baby home.


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CHAPTER – 1

On hearing the doorbell Nupur quickly opened the door.On seeing the crying child in Mayank's arms,Nupur was surprised.She asked,"Ye kiska bachcha hai Mayank?"He replied,"Pata nehi Nupur aate waqt dekha tha vo raaste mein beth kar ro rahi thi.Ab itni baarish mein main isko akela to chor nehi sakta hu na isiliye le aaya."Nupur said,"Tumne bohot achcha kiya.Ab tum jaao,jaakar change karlo."She took the child from his arms and went to her room.Mayank too followed her and said,"Iske to kapre bheeg gaye hai zara iske kapre badalva do."Nupur said,"Abhi iske size ke kapre…"Suddenly something struck into her mind.She said,"Tumhe yaad hai ma ne mere pregnancy ke waqt chote chote kapre banaakar diye the ghar mein pehnaane ke liye.Vohi de deti hu."While saying she became sad.She said,"Agar aaj meri bachchi zinda hoti to ye kapre usiko hi deti na."Mayank understood her feelings and said,"Udaas mat ho Nupur aur jaldi karo varna bachchi ko thand lag jaayegi."Nupur quickly changed the dress but even for a single second the baby didn't stop crying.After that,Nupur made some food for the child but even after a lot of pampering and trying,the child didn't take food.Mayank asked,"Ab hum kya karenge?Isne to kuch bhi nehi khaya?Bhukhe pet aise kaise sula denge isko?"She said,"Ek kaam karti hu isko pehle sula deti hu uske baad khila dungi."Nupur took the child in her lap and patted her slowly and sang a lori for her.The baby was also total exhausted,so she fell fast asleep.Nupur made her lie down in the bed and went to the kitchen.She had every baby item in her house.She took out the feeding bottle and poured some milk in it.She kept the bottle in a mug of cold water and after it was cooled,Nupur took the bottle and went inside their bedroom.Mayank who was lying beside the baby asked,"Ab usko ye pilaaogi kaise?"She whispered,"Just wait and watch."She put the nib of the bottle inside her mouth and she,too,in her sleep,started sucking the milk.Mayank was surprised at this.He,with an applauding tone,said,"Sach kehte hai tum aurto ko ma banne ki training lene ki koi zarurat nehi hai.Tum logo mein to janam se hi ek mother instinct hota hai."The child finished up her milk and then fall asleep.Nupur carefully wiped her mouth and then returned to the kitchen.When Nupur returned to her room,Mayank said,"Hum kal isko police station lekar chalenge.Pata nehi kiski bachchi hogi aur shaayad iske ma baap bhi isey dhundh rahe honge."Nupur agreed,"Tum thik keh rahe ho."They decided to go to the police next day.

                                                                                           They reached the police station with the child.Mayank's school friend Kartik was posted as the OC in the police station.On hearing everything from Mayank,he said,"Tu fikar mat kar Mayank hum is bachchi ke ma baap ko kahi se bhi dhundh nikaalenge.Mazaak chal raha hai kya?Agar bachche ko paalne ki himmat nehi hai to paida kyu karte ho?Agar apne aap se alag karna hi hai to kisiko de do na jinhe bachcha nehi hai kamsekam bachcho ko ma baap ke naam ke saath saath unka pyar bhi mil jaayega."Nupur said,"Par bhaiya iske kapro se lagta hai ke ye bohot bare ghar ki bachchi hai aur aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ke ye bachchi kho gayi ho aur iske ma baap isko dhundh rahe ho."Kartik said,"Aap bohot bholi hai bhabhi.Aise kaand na bare gharo mein hi hote hai aur yahatak to ye log apne hi bachche ko kidnap karwaate hai paiso ke liye.Bare ghar ke bare kisse."Mayank asked,"Tabtak is bachchi ka kya karenge?"Kartik replied,"Bachchi hamaare paas rahegi."Nupur looked at the child and said,"Nehi nehi bhaiya itni chorti si hi to bachchi hai bas 2-3 saal ki hogi.Itni choti bachchi ko main aise hi nehi chor sakti."Kartik said,"Main aapki feelings samajhta hu bhabhi lekin yehi kanoon hai.Aise cases mein bachche ko sirf uske rishtedaar hi rakh sakte hai."Nupur said,"Aap to hume jaante hai na please bhaiya jabtak iske gharwaale nehi mil jaate isey hamaare saath hi rehne dijiye."Mayank said,"Ha Kartik maan ja na hamaari suni zindagi mein thore pal ke liye hi sahi lekin khushi bankar aayi hai.Rehne de na isey hamaare paas."Kartik thought for sometime and then said,"Thik hai tu kehta hai to main ijaazat de deta hu."Nupur happily said,"Thank you bhaiya aur hum vaada karte hai ke hum iska pura dhyaan rakkhenge."Mayank shook hands with Kartik and left with Nupur and the child from there.

                                                                                                 While on their way to home,they purchased some clothes for the child and also some toys.The child was playing with her doll and Nupur was sitting beside her and staring at her.Mayank came inside the bedroom and on seeing her like that,he asked,"Aise kya dekh rahi ho Nupur?Kuch soch rahi ho kya?"She replied,"Soch rahi hu ke na to hume iska naam pata hai aur na to ye khud apna naam bol paayegi par iska kuch to naam rakhna parega na."Mayank thought for a moment and then said,"Muskaan!Kaisa hai?"Nupur looked at him with a jerk.He said,"Tumhe yaad hai humne tey kiya tha ke agar hume beti hui to hum uska yehi naam rakkhenge par…"He took a deep breath and said,"Aur vaise bhi tumhaare miscarriage ke baad se tumne bhi to muskuraana hi chor diya tha.Jabse aayi hai tum bhi waapas iske jaisi muskuraane lagi ho."Nupur smiled and said,"Tum sahi keh rahe ho Mayank aaj agar hamaari beti zinda hoti to vo bhi lagbhag isi umar ki hi hoti na."He nodded his head.Nupur took the child in her arms and kissed on her cheeks and said,"Aaj se tum hamaari Muskaan."The baby smiled sweetly at Nupur.Mayank said,"Aww!Kitni pyari smile hai iski.Lagta hai isko bhi apna naam pasand aaya hai."Nupur laughed.



Edited by -Paulomi- - 20 June 2013 at 1:22am

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So beautiful story. Continue soon

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Nice story, heart touching concept hain...

Poor MayUr, but aab to unke zindegi mein Muskaan aa gayi hain unke khoye hue muskaan ko lautane ke liye..

Thanks to Faria Apu and Shaffy Di... Un dono ki spamming talent ke waje se humme tumse new story mil rahe hain :P

Continue soon and thanks for the pm...

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Originally posted by mayuloveu

So beautiful story. Continue soon
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Originally posted by Humayra

Nice story, heart touching concept hain...

Poor MayUr, but aab to unke zindegi mein Muskaan aa gayi hain unke khoye hue muskaan ko lautane ke liye..

Thanks to Faria Apu and Shaffy Di... Un dono ki spamming talent ke waje se humme tumse new story mil rahe hain :P

Continue soon and thanks for the pm...
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