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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update . . .
Goshh. . .the way u describd kriya's fear and al dat,it realy gave goosebums to me. . .haiye. . .
Di . .plz nxt part jaldi update kerna. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh My God Tish... This was terrific... I just loved it... It was... Freaking awesomeee... 
Tum aise ideas laati kha se ho yar...??? *bows down*

Rey was totally lost in her...but her fears... He stopped himself... I sooo just loved this thing abt him... πŸ˜³

Honestly mjhe pehle lga tha ki Rey uski help karega n all... Well... As if for now toh aisa kuch he nai...

Maybe aagey ho... Obviously... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

Kria being scared all over... Cud feel each n everything...

Tish... U r great... I loveddd it... πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by akanksha_arsha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
super update

loved it

wow i really love the way you write

it's amazing

well penned down chapter πŸ‘

kriya's fear... baba rey

it literally gave me goosebumps

it was simply wow !!!

thanks for the pm

update soon

and do pm me

i really wanna red further soon !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome parts.. just read both part 1&2 together... loved d way u showed kria's fear... i could feel it.. rey felt soft corner for kria.. rosy s understanding n  nice.. waiting to c wat s gonna happen to kria?? 
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Posted: 10 years ago
OH MY FREAKING GAWWDD ... !!! 
this was an awesome update ... 
u wrote soo well ... 
amazing 

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Posted: 10 years ago
have always wanted something like this to read...
 
thanks a tonn for this one!
 
so looking forward to it...!!
 
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
love the update
the way express kr fellings is so beautiful
only in 1st meet kria has such an impect on rey
love that
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing chapter...

awesomely written...

Just loved the way you captured the essence of it..

feelings were shown so beautifully...

The way Kria was feared was amazing and the treatment given and everything was amazing...

Just loved the way you showed Reyansh drawn to her and then how she was fearing.. and the tussle he was involved within himself..

just amazing...

Loved the way how you are including small things and everything...

waiting for next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update..!!!!

Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsum update really awsum I luved it 
Kria is a kid how old is she ??
That girl slapped her twice wat the hell 
Update soon
Thanx for the pm