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Edited by -Delilah- - 10 years ago

Amazing One  👍🏼

She must have harbored some masochistic desires… For what else was he but pain in its rawest form?

Eee! You write another OS! *Skips away to read it*

Hey...

Wrong post! :PEdited by -Delilah- - 10 years ago

awesome Os Loved it 

yes! at times i thought what could have been the story if khushi had refused to marry him!! i think the reason for their marriage was rather stupid to some extent(just my view, dont bash me han!?!)...cumm'on khushi could have just gone and told everyone what arnav told her and let family decide the future...payal's a strong person too and it would have a real test for payash's love story to see that if akash could really stand for payal...!! what say?

about the os...i love it...any doubt?😉

Nice try. Gives us another perspective. Another way the story could've progressed.

simply superb.loved it