Originally posted by Jyo.Arshi.IPK
You know am an HP Fanatic and I absolutely love the friendship Harry & Hermoine share and right now you have made me so happy, that no words can ever describe what I feel so am putting all my love and emotions and feelings into the best friendship hug I have even seen, if we both meet someday then I am gonna run to you and hug u tight !! aww big hugs back! You dedicated a very special update of SP to me Tina, I mean I know how special this story and this update is to you,an update we all have been waiting for so long and u dedicate it to me, this is truly special !! i thought u'd like it with all its symbolism and emotions Now coming to the update, well for each update I keep telling u that it was ur best, but u and Satina come with an update the next time which exceeds expectations from your previous update and this time also..its the same !! this has to be the best of SP not just best but also its littered with symbolism all over it and I will get to it as I comment. So let me get my quill ink and scrolls ready !!
can't wait *sits up*
The first thing that comes across in this update, is Khushi's overwhelming care for her husband .. her Arnav, she is so concerned about his well being and health, she has come a long way, from hate to loathing to attraction to desire to selfless love and care and passion.
He is working away on his laptop and all she wants is for him to rest for a little.
her memory of their convo while packing, the gift, well she is already debating on the lingerie, like srsly !!! come on Khushi...u dnt need to think twice...
Agreed--she has come much more along than Arnav. And in 10 chapters, the hate has transformed into something very real, rare, and beautiful.
His words when he gifts them to her... " I dont want all of you exposed thats only for me to see " well it holds a world of love and care and possessiveness in them !! , maybe he doesnt call her his wife but his heart already treats her like his wife, its only a matter of saying it out loud now !!
Khushi loves the dress he gifted her... yes its feminine and sexy and thats exactly how she wants to be for Arnav so then how can she refuse him !!
well Miss Naughty Voxen sure has plans tucked away in her mind space which she plans to unleash on an unsuspecting Arnav both have plans
next comes some of the parts thats heart wrenchingly beautiful, like how it tugs at Arnav's heartstrings.. it does the same to us readers.
Her care and Arnav's reaction to her care... he is so tortured and ripped in his heart from his past that no matter how real it is... he cant accept the love and care in Khushi's eyes as a reality yet, its an overwhelming feeling , which he is gonna take sometime more to fully accept and claim it as his own though his heart is already doing that.
wow, you put his thought process so beautifully! I'm mesmerized by these lines His slef control is as thin as a tightrope walkers balancing act ' it can snap any minute, deprived of her and then flashes of the shameless and very intimate desk scene well I cant blame him...that can undo even the greatest of control freaks !!! ask Christian Grey he will dfntly understand Arnav's plight !!! Even when his control is vanishing into thin air, he doesnt let go of the chance to tease her, that shows the dominant in him a good dominant, he wants to hear her beg, shows the control freak ASR !!! and then their passion unfurls...thank heavens for the privacy that First class cabins gives these days !! yes, the first passionate dose that both want--but he is ASR, he wants her to admit her desire for him Arnav & Khushi walks out from the airport like a true hubby-wifey... hand in hand... memories of their stolen kissess flashing thru her head... its like an almost honeymoon , well it is in a manner of speaking, considering the fact tht she considers Arnav to be her husband already and Arnav already treats her like his wife !! Khushi's possessiveness for Arnav is so visible even in the barest of situations, she notices hw the receptionist is giving Arnav the charms, though he doesnt give a damn !! sets the stage for what it might be if a wannabe throws herself at Arnav, well we know Khushi will deal with her such tht the girl might never go to another man again !! Khushi disappointment hearing suites and then her happiness hearing connecting door is awww so amazing !!! She doesnt want any distance or privacy from him anymore...she has given herself all to him and now she cant hold anything away from him...truly he is her husband for her yes both are husband-wife in all the ways that really matter. try as he might to deny it, Arnav is behaving like a love-obsessed, protective, caring hubby And Khushi is giving him the love he never had The suite selection is perfect !! love it... its after Dr.Tina who selected or maybe Satina !! either way..good choice girls !! Satina's pick But i love it too Arnav's line to join him anytime she is done and freshened up...well well... how did she ever manage to resist from openin the door and running into his arms !! And the next part... lord khushi is such a tease... she is perfect for her Laad Governor !!! Her confidence to be bold... to seduce him... the memory of him moaning out her name from their desk encounter...well it has given her the extra punch , to know what she is capable of making him feel !! an emboldened Khushi is even more dangerous !! I love bold Khushi--finally she is behaving like a woman madly heads over heels crazy for her husband Arnav's condition is so hillarious... here he is trying to be the absolute gentleman and she is all out to seduce him !! he thinks she is out of bounds and he like a good hubby is making movie plans and his wife is all out to kill him !! women love being wicked !!! and then he comes to know that she is all his to take and then comes the part that made my stomach do backflips !! he tells her he wants to make her his and waits for her to agree to it !!! Arnav is such a Chavinistic MAN in all the right sense !!! but there is an underlying layer to his shade, beneath the possessive demand and control is a tender Arnav, who wants Khushi to repeatedly assert to him that she belongs to him... that she wants him as much as he does... that she loves him the way he does. it shows the child in him !! Brilliant! Yes, he wants her to cement their relationship out loud. he needs to hear those words. like u said, he can't believe he can be this lucky. as he said last chapter, he didn't think he 'deserved' her so the words mean the world to him. and their passion unfurls once again !!! its not just raw passion... its their need to be as connected as possible physically and emotionally...give them a chance...they will get onto each other's skin... they love being in their world whr its just the two of them !! And subtly I must say, there is a trace of Mind Games in this Arhi as well, they arent aware of their mind connection but they are sure doing it here, they feel each other's feeling and emotions so well, they both know and feel what they need from each other !!!
I didnt hurt u ... did I ??
Of course not--i agree, more than bodies joining, its their minds, hearts, and souls well this line yet again proves that his care is nevr ending !!! he may not know it but he is everything that the perfect hubby shud be !!
their sight seeing together... that was maybe the most beautiful part of the update.
their emotional bonding, going to central park , just spending time there... enjoying each other's company... more than Khushi... its Arnav here we need to write about, his life is finally get a sense of normalcy, he is enjoying his life with his girl like any other couple does.
The darkness in him can be erased only through such instance of passionate normalcy and its heart warming to see u and Satina bring it up.
Yes--this is arhi normal--them without any darkness intruding. and its beautiful to see no?
Arnav watches Romeo-Juliet along with Khushi, his focus to enjoy the play and comfort his girl througnthe moments is divine !! its an inclination towards the fact that Arnav can bend his life to any extent for Khushi, he can do things he may never do otherwise only for Khushi !!
Arnav goes to the church along with Khushi, he watches her pray, the guy who doesnt set his foot into a religious place, well he did exactly that now, he doesnt believe in gods but Arnav believes in Khushi's faith in her prayers !! and all her prayers are for her husband .. for her Arnav its an important aspect here, well if ASR can watch Romeo-Juliet for his girl, if he can go to a place of worship for his lady love, then he can dfntly accept marriage !! Yes--actions speak louder than words in his case. ASR if u notice has not that many lines in SP--but his eyes and actions speak volumes
neither Arnav or Khushi needs marriage but Khushi needs the protection and security that marriage will give her, society will demand it and Arnav will give it coz his heart makes him want to do everything that will make Khushi his, to himself, to her, to his family, to his employees and to the world at large !!
have u read the next couple of chapters hint hint
He will leave no stone unturned when it comes to making Khushi his own and sealing his right on her.
his line... us against the world !! that sets the direction of the story !!
it shows that the world will conspire against them and they will face it all together, right upto the point of death.
even death cant tear them apart, even if they have to die a tragic death like shakespeares unfortunate love birds..so be it but Arnav and Khushi wont exist without each other !!!
i hope u all won't forget that line. u caught the symbolism so so well, m amazed then comes the next part that sets hearts racing, khushi in the blacksari, I love u both for this, through out this sequence, u girls gave everything that we IPK lovers wanted to see in it !!! We wanted to see it too--that's the beauty of FF right, we can finally have all that we were wanted for arhi Another instance of emotional bonding and healing here, them lying on each other's laps, just enjoying each other's company !! it ws pure bliss !! and then their little games... their kiss session and the ASR-KKG style Strip Rummy !! where do u get such naughty ideas from...damn Tina u are gonna face hell now !!! Satina u too lady !! not gonna spare u for this !!! Satina already teased me a lot for this. Yeah, this 3rd part was all me but it ws highly entertaining and very much blushworthy !!! and un included everything in it and much more as to what we wanted in the Farmhouse scene !! thanx for bringing IPK back and also giving us everything and more than what we missed !! Now every scene in the siggy below by nabila has happened--including the critical farmhouse scene. it was so important, I'm glad i could improve on it You dressed in nothing but the silver jewellery.. I want that more than anything !!! gosh tina I was blushing so much !! proud of Khushi for not turning into mush hearing such lines !! Oh she was i imagine. We all were For her man to admit such fantasies, wow Khushi seems to be having no qualms in touching him now... if u know what and where I mean !! haha agreed, she was dying to reach over and ...
You are mine... only mine
only yours ... husband
I am waiting for the day when the italics turn non italics... when Khushi will finally find the courage to openly call him husband without fear of his reaction.
and only Arnav can give her that confidence and make her feel it as her right to call him her husband !!
like hw made her feel at ease and shed her inhibitions and openly accpe their intimacy, the same way, one day Arnav will make her realise that she has the right to openly call him her hubby without fear of his reaction, infact he will want to hear it from her.
yes marriage is like the unspoken clash between them
Okay so thats enough of my ranting for now...I know I can go on forever !!! but i will stop now precap is awesome !!! rain sequence...again something we wanted so badly in the show and u girls are giving it to us !! love u both !! the caps are already killing me !! I saw ur note Tina, what do I say, I cant choose between DH and SP so watever it is that u decide to update, I am okay with it coz I love both equally !!! waiting for Secluded Island and ur OS !! We're gonna make that rain seq amazing--swear on rabba ve! Im so glad u liked it! hun, hugs hugs and hugs for that wonderful analysis, I'm gonna save it luv ya!