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Arhi-HBO FF#6: Secret Passion-Ch11 p1,NEW THD p149 (Page 60)

wonderblake IF-Dazzler

Joined: 07 March 2012
Posts: 2928

Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:30am | IP Logged
OMG, How can one chapter be filled with so much emotions, passion, and sensuality?!
Tina, that was mind blowing.
I just don't have words to explain what I felt about this chapter.
Everything was just so perfect, I didn't want that moment and the chapter to end.
I think it was the same for Khushi and Arnav as well.

You've outdone yourself once again Tina. ClapClapClap
Waiting for the next super fantastic chapter, and that is the extended honeymoon Blushing

Can't wait to read it, and the rain sequence Embarrassed

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InkyCupid Goldie

Joined: 22 December 2009
Posts: 1637

Posted: 22 June 2013 at 2:04am | IP Logged
Your updates keep on getting better and better. Longer even. As always, this story was full of emotions love and passion between Arnav and Khushi.Love how you have developed their bond and chemistry. I specially enjoyed the plane scene when they are under the blanket, away from the publics eyes... and until now they both have only indulged in pleasure. It was so cute how they went out and about exploring the grand city and creating their own personal jokes regarding the museums. Ofcourse their real fun was in the bedroom, where you once again came up with different scenes. The strip-rami was hot and different.. and Khushi once again lost to Arnav. Their honeymoon is going great, I am just afraid that Khushi might get hurt if Arnav fails to accept her as his wife.. she already thinks he's her husband:(

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12345abcdefg Senior Member

Joined: 25 June 2012
Posts: 418

Posted: 22 June 2013 at 2:19am | IP Logged
Super hot update. it ws awsome!!!

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Anamika100 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 July 2009
Posts: 3526

Posted: 22 June 2013 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Great update. Love how they are both possessive of each other. Two perfect halves of one complete entity.

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--Isabella-- IF-Stunnerz

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Joined: 22 December 2012
Posts: 43562

Posted: 22 June 2013 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Wow Tina, that was hot and passionate...

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avni_barun IF-Rockerz

Joined: 28 June 2012
Posts: 4539

Posted: 22 June 2013 at 8:18am | IP Logged

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yafa2b Groupbie

Joined: 17 October 2012
Posts: 194

Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Oh ladies you did it again. The update was
so HOT. Great writing ladies.
Congratulations on the new thread and thanks for the pm.

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Diakumar17 Senior Member

Joined: 31 October 2012
Posts: 339

Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Best  update of  SP. thank you girls for this superb chapter.
I really liked arnav lying on Khushi's lap, the way u both described it, it's fab. Just like newly wed on a honeymoon. 
Business part- having separate room
Pleasure part-it's the connecting door - LOL I don't knw who come up wid tat line, but its  brilliant.

Thank u so much for the pm Tina & I would really really really really really really really really really wanna u to update DH

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