Posted: 21 June 2013 at 7:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ara_000OMFG now dis is simply freaking hottt...!
I am in loss of words actually aftr reading d chappy...!!
Goddd i am actually blushing like a moron...i was reading d chappy on my phn nd was blushing so hard dat my mom was suspiciously staring at me as if i am doing sumthng...lol
ok now cuming to d update -
so they finally hopped the flight to NY...!
I love it how u have penned down khushi's pain by seeing her arnav so dam tired yet workimg on his lappy witout paying any heed to anythng...wen she could not take it anymore she approached him wit her sexy voice nd it worked...hwr arnav forgot evry dam thng nd kissed her which deffo make her blush nd yet alert as they were in public but soon her embrassing face turned into a happy one wen arnav covered themselves wit blanket as if seperating themselves from the outside world...
As if we say-
''Aap,main aur humari chotti si duniya''...!
nd dats it...khushi lost all her self control nd asked him to pleasure her nd her arnav did not keep any stone unturned to pleasure her...
loved it how khushi was getting it hard to concentrate on NYC wen her arnav was sitting beside her wit his hands possessively around her waist...!
Nd den the check in...i was actually grinning wen arnav asked d receptionist to give d keys of their suites nd dat irked khushi...she blatantly said dat she had thought dis trip to b of bogh pleasure nd bussiness nd her words do make arnav admire her more nd he broke d secret by saying their suites have a connecting door nd to her surprise hesaid her dat he can nvr sleep witout her by his side...his open confession do make khushi a bit surprised coz even by now she knows it but she nver expected him to say it like dis...
Nd wen the actually checked in,khushi was all set to tease him nd she knws dat if she sumhow wore dat sexy lingerie he would get teased thinking dat they cannot make love as she is having periods...naughty girl
loved it how he was teasing him nd wen he asked whether she was doing all these purposely she actually confessed nd to her annoyance she sexily passed d remote to him nd turned to leave d room wen he caught her nd again to tease him she said dat they cannot make love bcoz of her periods but wen arnav actually believed it she broke in some giggles nd told him dat its over nd there is nothng which can keep them away from letting him made her his again nd thats it they again drowned into passion nd claimed each other as if there is no tomrw...!
loved it how khushi woke hi up d nxt morning nd asked him to take her outside as she wants to view d whole NYC nd there he is back wit his naughtiness nd gave her condition dat he will deffo take her outside if they had a shower together but khushi being khushi knew very well wat is cuming nd she denied but its all waste as ASR finally got it wat he wanted...
I love that play scene where khushi cried seeing d two lovers parted away from each other due to dis cruel world...
''Them versus the world'' - this phrase somewhere helds true for them also...yes its true for them but their love story will deffo not end like them...!
Loved it how u highlighted the phrase by making arnav utter it again aftr khushi...
Now cuming to stip tease -
ohhh goddd dat was f*ckig hottt
i am again blushing like a moron nd dis tym i am hiding from my mom...thnk god its raining outside so the temperatr is cool otherwise i would have to put on d AC...!
kya kar di didu aapne hum logo ke saath...itni koushish karti hoon,itni zada kpushish kart hoon ke blush na karoo par hum blush karne ke bina SP update par hi nahi pate hai...!
so they started the game nd i must say both r vry much desperate to win to make each othet get rid of clothes...nd dats it arnav succeed to win nd he hitted d spot by saying her to strip her saree
nd den it was khushi's turn nd she also hitted it right by asking him to strip his pants...goddd i am blushing hard now
nd den one by one their clothes came out nd khushi was left in her jewellery nly...sexy indeed nd thus Arnav singh raizada again got busy in marking his khushi as his again...
Dis chappy has evrythng in it...blatant passion,caringness,responsibilities,possessiveness,confessions - all r there in it...!
I love it how khushi prayed for her husband in d church nd lastly wen arnav said dat she is his nly,she happily repeated his words by saying imdeed she is his...while in her mind she said it dat she is his nly his from her sould nd heart nd he is none but her husband for whom she can do anythng nd evrythng,who, she loves wit each nd evry fibres of her body...
u nailed it up again didu...!
Kudoos to u
i love every bits of dis chappy...
Nd u knw it already but still wanna say it again dat i love u
u r d bst...!
aww im so glad u liked this chapter--it was important for arhi and set up a lot of the foundation for the future. yes, they're getting closer, in their little world
i loved loved loved this line:
he is none but her husband for whom she can do anythng nd evrythng,who, she loves wit each nd evry fibres of her body...Mindblowing chappy
its perfect! like too perfect! if u knew the whole story, u would know how right i am. loved ur feedback cutoo