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Posted: 17 June 2013 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Di.. this all seems so pure.. so touching.. the words right from the bottom of the heart ready to melt anyone..

A true friend.. if existed.. like there are hardly a few.. who really give importance to friends.. you see there are people who just make namesake friends only for dome nor the other purporse.. well in short.. mean.. and here you have dedicated a wonderful piece of writing.. a poem.. to all your pen friends.. this shows you value all the people who are somwhere close to you.. have ever been linked to you.. and this is what makes you special.. so different..

Well I would really thank you.. for the utmost affection and such a beautiful gesture.. towards all your pen friends.. which somehwere even includes me..

And about the Poem.. well you have written it with all your heart.. no doubt it is the best way.. with best use of words one would have ever expressed their feelings for friends.. like you did.. no wonder you are one amongst the best people I have known on IF..

Thanks once again..

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Posted: 17 June 2013 at 10:04am | IP Logged
ha ha ha am very bad at giving long comments...!!!

This was such a flawless poem...
totally loved it., very well n beautifully written...!!!!!
have no words above this for me to tell...!! <3 <3 <3

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Posted: 17 June 2013 at 11:19am | IP Logged
deeps u know ur a awesome author b in poems r stories... d poem of u made me feel y cant real life friends b true d way pen r virtual friends r... my friends betrayed me n now i find it difficult to believe 1 ... but after joining IF i made few friends who i trust n believe from bottom of my heart N UR 1 OF THEM... ur poem made me emotional but at d same time happy that i got virtual friends who love n trust me than d once 1 ve here back home... love u for this poem n for d person ur..

with lots of love,
vaishu...

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Posted: 17 June 2013 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
hey dear...
i just wanna say i really appreciate you penned down your beautiful words for all your pen friends here... and feels are absolutely mutual ...
you all have become a part of life that is a fact which cant be ignored...
i know my comment is not really a big one... but time constraints... but it was too good

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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Beautiful poem
loved it completelyHug

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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 9:30am | IP Logged
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Its simply awesome and beautifull poetry...I loved it..I always feel and i am sure to say..Their is only one relation which go longer in a human life..which is "Friendship"..Dosti"..Each and every essence of dosti is completely justified with u'r words and lines..That is perfect poetry...
I am biggest lover of hindi poetry and shayaris..So it feel great to read u'r poem in hindi..So moving on with u'r poem..


Dosti ...ek dor...dilon ko dilon se jodne wala...

Uski ek muskurahat ..dil me phool khilane wala..

Amazing start with beautifull wordings..

Dil se shuru hoke Dil tak pahunchta he ye ehsaas..

Jab koi dhundla sa chehra banne lagta he khaas..

Well said,its a relation from heart to heart..

Anjaan he...par aise juda tumse...jaise suron se sargam..

Dur he fir bhi itne kareeb he jaise dil me ho dhadkan..

Thats great line..Dosti means for "Agar hain toh sab kuch hain,aur nahi toh kuch bhi nahin"

Dosti ...ek yaad...jisme lamhe theher jate he..

Dost ki ek muskurahat...dil khush kar jata he..

Truly dost dil aur dimmag dono, khush kar jaate hain..

Uska ek ansoo...dil me chubh jata he...

Khamosh ungliya jaan phoonkte he is rishte me..

Now,its a preety turn of wordings here..loved it..

Ankahee dastan bayan hoti is kisse me...

Dosti ...ek dor...dilon ko dilon se jodne wala...


Wah..!!! beautifully ended here with starting line..Brilliant job..

U just done a perfect job of wording,thinking and imaginations..Amazingly written..I loved each and every line..Please dont mind.. i really think u should write more as a continue part of it...
My poetry is nothing in front of u'r work.u are multitalented..Keep it up dear..and do write more..i am waiting for it..

Sorry for late comment..And thanx for PM

Prateek




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Posted: 18 June 2013 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Di a beautiful poem on one of the most beautiful relations in lyf. Friendship. Wonderfully written the different aspects of friendship. Doston k bina zindagi adhoori hoti hai. Without friends lyf is nthng. A selfless relationship bonded by trust nd love. Once again a gr8 work di.

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Posted: 20 June 2013 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Awww such an AMAZING

A PERFECT ONE FOR IF FRIENDS

BEAUTIFUL

LOVELY

SUPER AWESOME :)

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