Dosti..a poem dedicated to my pen friends :) - Page 2

Deepu it was one f the beautiful poetry i have read on dosti...yaar u seriously a gem in writing...

Wow Deepu di
another awesome poem by you
I loved the poem
thanks for the pm

awww...sho beautiful..!!!😛😉
really ...ur an amazing writer di...😆😳👏

juzz luved it...

This is amazing ^_________^

Just loved it Di..so true so far yet strongly connected,unbreakable bond...
Friendship its really as u said Di...
Very special...The Purest relation that we share...
We have nt seen each other bt our hearts are so connected that it cannot be explained...
I have experienced so many things here...This is my second family to me ...
Thank u Di for explaining this sweet friendship in a way sweeter way apse better koi nahi kar pata... Love u Di for this n thanku bahut chota word hai...bt yet thanku this is something very cherishable for me...from my Di


love u Di u r the best...!!!

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Wow dii such a beautiful poem di u wrote this for all of us⭐️⭐️ omg dii i wanna give u a tight hug dii...🤗it was a so sweet of u dii..😃u wrote the whole meaning...of friendship and aapne mera dil jeet liya diii...😳😳😳the way u explained this relationship i was just spell bound dii ...For me its not a but a gift to treasure,,😳,love u loads di i know that we dont have such a big bond btw but this gloden thread of friendship binds us too di...so love u tons dii😳😳😳...A very very beautiful poem ...words cant describe it dii...all i can say is that...😳😳😳...




Edited by rakhiankita - 10 years ago

Awww deeps the poem was awesome it touched my heart..I loved it right from the start to the end.. I loved loved loved it.. Ur a an awesome poetry writer.. 😃 ❤️. Awesome piece of work.. 😊

Oh MY God (tannu style) awesome such a beautiful poem
superbly mind blowing, thats like so sweet of you..:)
how amazing is this poem?? Woww !!
REaally loved it :) like seriously (again tannu style) :) :) :) :) :) :)

Though we have never spoken
I know you by the language
That you write
And that I read.
You may think of this
as a quiet occupation,
but it is not,
for words beguile the mind.
To the voiceless ear they bring
Astonishment and awe,
that the hearts of strangers
Could beat so alike.
You brought to me
A world of words
Pen and ink conceived
Mind and Heart believe.
After reading this post
I pause before cment,
nd read cments gvn by my sme other friends,
tonight when i look at the sky,
i pause awhile to see the stars,
silently give thanks
For your written word.

I just hope ths is nt so lame i just tried to rply in ur style.

Btw lovd ur post di.
It's outstanding.
Take a standing avation from my side for post.

P. S.-ths ws a friendshp poem jiski maximum line maine edit kr de.Edited by swaron9113 - 10 years ago

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unres...

Woww diii a very beautiful and heart touching poem... Didnt knew you are a poet too and such a amazing one...

Loved each an every line but the favourite one were...

Khamosh ungliya jaan phukti hai is rishte mai..
Ankhen dastan bayan karti h is kisse mai...

So true... Love you dii... It was really a beautiful and fabulous poem... True to every word for each friend... 🤗

so glad and happy to have you as a friend and as a big sister... 🤗Edited by toshi_ta - 10 years ago