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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 1:57pm | IP Logged



DOSTI...<3<3<3



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Dosti ...ek dor...dilon ko dilon se jodne wala...

Uski ek muskurahat ..dil me phool khilane wala..

Dil se shuru hoke Dil tak pahunchta he ye ehsaas..

Jab koi dhundla sa chehra banne lagta he khaas..

Anjaan he...par aise juda tumse...jaise suron se sargam..

Dur he fir bhi itne kareeb he jaise dil me ho dhadkan..

Dosti ...ek yaad...jisme lamhe theher jate he..

Dost ki ek muskurahat...dil khush kar jata he..

Uska ek ansoo...dil me chubh jata he...

Khamosh ungliya jaan phoonkte he is rishte me..

Ankahee dastan bayan hoti is kisse me...

Dosti ...ek dor...dilon ko dilon se jodne wala...


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Dedicated to my pen FriendsEmbarrassed

Luv
Deep



Edited by deep_Tanha - 15 June 2013 at 11:11pm

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
res for besties

Surbhi...My Miss PositiveEmbarrassed

Dosti ek wo cheez hai jo by god kya cheeezzz haiii LOLLOL
lol kuch bhi. 

Hukum aap toh na meri taraf se khud ko salute krlo ek baar...abhi ke abhi!
Hahaha kar liyaa? Chalo ab aage likhti hu..aap toh multi talented ho rhe ho...lagta hai lalita ki aatma aa gayi hai aap mei  LOL
Dil ki Dhadkan waali line toh Blushing
Direct Heart pe lagi.

By now i have realized that what nonsense i have written above Stern Smile
DD you are my Hukum 
You are my knight in shining armour LOL jab bhi kuch log mujhe neecha dikhaate hai toh aap aa jaate ho Cool
You are the Best!
And aapko pata hai na baaki ka toh! WinkLOL

And this poem is seriously apt for all my pen friends here...its been a long time that i have talked to all of them but they mean a lot to me!
ThankYou for this wonderful Poem Hukum! Heart
Love you :*



Lalita(Our Poetess)Embarrassed


Diii
Tightest hugs to you <3<3<3<3
Your poem was so oh god what do I say
your just awesome
dostI Ek dor Aww such a beautiful line
you explained the importance of friendship
and dostI ke liye Uss dost ko Dekhne ki Zaroorat Nai hai
jab Voh dost smile karta hai Kitna happy feel hota hai
jab Voh rota hai saari duniya bikhar jaati hai
sach kaha Aapne Ek dost Dil mein Rehta hai
Uske bina Iss dhadkan ka Koi vajood Nahi hota
I love you sooo much for this poem



Edited by deep_Tanha - 16 June 2013 at 12:18am

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Aww di it was wonderful... it depicted the whole relation we all share here on if... friendship means a relation not of blood but of heart that connects two hearts without any commitment or without any bounds... A relation made by us ... a thread sewed by us.. a plant we sow ourselves... loved it to the core di... you define the things best in words and through that what is evident is how sweet person you are...


loved it di... 


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u made my day...

awesome poem...

loved it to the core...Embarrassed

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Hey deepu di

what beautifull amazing piece of work...really luv it from core of my heart


indeed simplification of each and every word and specification toward friendship is brillient

your pure angelic thought always touches my heart


luv u di
keep ur beautiful thoughts growing...
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Edited by Vishaka45 - 16 June 2013 at 12:49am

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Di Hug Hug Hug

My words r meaningless in front of ur poem..

U stole my heart di.. Yeh lo mera dil Heart

Dis is magical i love it..
Mere liye friendship means a lot its like my life my friends r very special to me n such a poem on friend is purely magical.. Ur one such special friend n di of mine Hug

Love u dis is magical u made my day Hug

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 15 June 2013 at 2:22pm

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Dii HugHug

Awww such a sweet gesture by you. Love u loas for this one too HugHug
As I told you that you are the best<3 The banner is awesome.
The poem it says it all. Its deep from your heart. Your feelings and love for us is clearly visible. This is the relation that we all share here without seeing each other we know each other so well. We connect to a different level and that's the beauty of it EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 
You made my day. Thanks a tonnee for this can't thank u enough lost in each and every word of this poem <3 Day DreamingHeart


Edited by HSFA - 15 June 2013 at 2:48pm

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Dis is soo beautiful deep... Amazing...

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