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Posted: 17 June 2013 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Story No 1It was a lovely story. Very well written. The team distribution was lovely and there was a lot of good investigation. You really justified the theme well. The trio scene at the beginning was absolutely fantastic! And the girls were fantastic as well! Um...but like everyone pointed out so far, why did Naksh tell everything to Tina? That was a bit confusing for me. But otherwise the story was too good!

Story No 2 - A good story, but it was a bit bold in my belief. Though I rather liked reading it. The way you vividly described each person's emotions were lovely. I could almost feel it. The concern shown by the duo for the female duo was sweet. Gave the story a human touch. But one question. Why did Purvi and Shreya drink the juice? They should have thrown it. After all who knows what was mixed in it. Otherwise the story was awesome!

Will read the rest of the stories soon...

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Originally posted by swagatamghosh94

Read story number 1 and 2. For story number 1 , I thought that the writing skills of the author was a little bit below par. The plot was very interesting and and the topic very current. Nice to see someone taking a topic concerning the country at this very moment and using it creatively. But I still found the writing disappointing. Sorry to the author if you found this offensive.

For story no 2, I thought it was a very bold topic. Plot was very nice. Nice personalized touch to all the characters. Good writing skills. Painted a very vivid picture in my mind. Really good story. Congrats to the author.

Originally posted by swagatamghosh94

Read the other stories too. All were okay except story no 3. Story no 3 was absolutely brilliant. It was really the best story out of all the ones submitted. Fantastic writing skills, brilliant vocabulary, brilliant plot and terrific composition. Just the most beautiful story I have read from a non professional writer. The writer is very talented and hopefully develops his/her talent in the best possible way.   

SWAGATAMGHOSH94, Thank you so much for Ur Precious Feedback for Story Writers but plz also Give Your Feedback about Rest of the Stories as Story number 4, 5 and 6...
all really doing alot and its their Right that we the Readers give our Support to them, plz tell them about their Stories, Ur likes/Dislikes, it gives them Encouragement...
Plz, its just a Humble Request to Post Ur Feedback about Rest of the Stories as well...
Thank you so much...Big smile

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Originally posted by neha_dna

STORY NO. 5 and 6...
Good efforts by the writers... Nice plots and good attempts... Star
All the best Thumbs Up

NEHA Gudda... plz give a Detail Feedback for Story number 5 and 6 as U know Writer waiting for Feedbacks... Plz. post it like U did with Rest Ones...Tongue

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Story No: 6

The Story started with a Call at PURVI Cell...Smile

They tracked and went to the Location found SUSHMA and starting of KIRTI/KOYAL Story from there...Tongue

The Sports was Change and Somehow the Story did not Stretch and Penned Down on Right track...Confused

PURVI and SHERYA Disguise was so Limited time and also as Not Escorts...Confused

I love the way PURVI handled and Buckup FREDDIE Sir...ClapClapClap

Story was Much Rushy, everything comes in Hurry way...Ouch

I like the Ending Tournament...Clap

Thank you so much...Embarrassed

No hard/Sad/Bad feelings on my Reviews, its only GD Point of Views...Smile

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Story No 3 - This is an awesome story! Research, investigation, writing, story...everything is awesome!!! That's all I can say! Really I don't think I can say much else than that!

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I started with story no 1.
 
The basic story is very good. It perfectly fits into the given topic. The scenes of drug addicts, the rustic dialogues of the drugs gang are all well-thought out. Daya's sudden laughter as a woman was a fantastic idea.
 
I also liked the scene of Daya listening to backstreet boys music...eating chips...then  ACP coming in asking him to show what he was eating...and picking up a few pieces and eating it...I loved imagining that scene. Smile
 
I am glad there was no injury,hospital, crying and senti stuff.
 
 I am not looking at any loopholes...because I feel there are some parts which I couldn't understand. The main issue I had with this story is the clarity. I hope you will take care of this next time. Overall very good attempt.

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