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Read STORY NO. 2
Enjoyed reading the story...
Liked the way the story was concentrated on 4 officers... Clap
Great job by Purvi and Shreya... It was very nicely portrayed by the writer...ClapClap
I somehow felt that Nihaal would never have left his Computer unlocked...
DUO's concern for the female DUO was very nicely shown...ClapClap
The story justifies the theme...Smile
Loved the ending... "Trials still going on..."...ClapClapClapClap So true...!!
 
Overall a great effort by the writer... Big smile
 
 
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Read story number 1 and 2. For story number 1 , I thought that the writing skills of the author was a little bit below par. The plot was very interesting and and the topic very current. Nice to see someone taking a topic concerning the country at this very moment and using it creatively. But I still found the writing disappointing. Sorry to the author if you found this offensive.

For story no 2, I thought it was a very bold topic. Plot was very nice. Nice personalized touch to all the characters. Good writing skills. Painted a very vivid picture in my mind. Really good story. Congrats to the author.


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Read the other stories too. All were okay except story no 3. Story no 3 was absolutely brilliant. It was really the best story out of all the ones submitted. Fantastic writing skills, brilliant vocabulary, brilliant plot and terrific composition. Just the most beautiful story I have read from a non professional writer. The writer is very talented and hopefully develops his/her talent in the best possible way.   

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STORY NO.3
Oh... what should I say...!!! Excellent writing... great vocabulary...!!! Nice story-line, the characters were described very well...!!! Great writing...!!! ClapClapClapClap Nothing more to say... Brilliant Work..!!!
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STORY NO.4
I liked the dissappearance of the injured Girl from the car, but I didn't quite get how they got rid of the Dead body... Liked the story... Poorvi and Shreya did a great job and DUO too...  Great work...
All the Best Thumbs Up


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STORY NO. 5 and 6...
Good efforts by the writers... Nice plots and good attempts... ClapClapClapClapStar
All the best Thumbs Up
 
Have given detailed reviews later... Smile


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