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I am expecting 2 more stories...hopefully. Then it will be a meaningful contest...Smile

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Posted story no 4. Big smile
 
I am expecting one more...will give rules for rating by tomorrow.
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
i m extremely sorry...cant get time to read stories till now...will try to read very soon...

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Will try to read and give review as soon as possibleSmile. Waiting for the marking procedure eagerly Vis di[:P:]. Best of luck to all the writersThumbs Up.

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Will start reading by tomorrow or Monday.

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Posted: 16 June 2013 at 7:41am | IP Logged

Story no: 3

As we all know who is the writer of this Story, cz I think as being a CIDien, I must Proud On His Skills, talent and really feeling Good to have Him connected with CID forum...Clap

DEMONSTAR, He is really a Gem when comes to Writing Skills...ClapClapClap

The Research, Portraying, Connection, Execution everything was Tremendions in His Every piece of work including This too...Clap

The Characters which He build always Rememberd and here I Love XEREX character alot...ClapClapClap

Some Lovely Dialogues... Ohhh... DEMONSTAR that Baby Dialogue was Marvellous...StarClapStar

Now coming to Criticism... I hope DEMONSTAR take it not Personal and also His Fans too... its just Mine GD point of View as a Reader...Smile

The Story started with Celebrations, then going to Post Celebration Euphoria, then Mysterious call... Lovely Plan to checkout Everything except TANYA caught, as What She was doing Inside, alright if She was there for Demanding Her Money, why at That time as She knew CID will Raid there of  If She caught by RAJA and BUBBA unexpectidely, why He did not Call RAJA to change the direction within a Minute...Confused

Then TANYA confession, the Party and then the Inclusion of ESCORTS...Smile

DEMONSTAR as U already Portryated XEREX character so Storng, Quick and Sharp, and when Catch was there, obviously all doors moving on Emergency Landinind Bases... Did U think that at a Party Venue, in CATCH aspect, XEREX personal exsistence, RAJA and BUBBA arrest, could SANJOKER allowed to come with Newly Two Escorts...Ouch

Everyone knows Whats the Role of ESCORTS, so in that Scenario where everything was on Risk, why not every members included in that racket did not Angry on SAJOKER about that they why he would be there with Two New Escorts either in that Risk facter where they knew about Some Arrest, XREX fear was also on their Minds, CATCH was also One Scary factor and SANJOKER mates knew that with BOLD and BEAUTIFUL always Comes with ALCOHAL...Confused

I again admitted its only My Idea that I did not like that SegmentSmile... XEREX Death and whole Fight of PURVI was Not upto the mark coz in that Scenario I must wanted Some Weird...Wink

Why CID team did not make their Setup in Nearest Place from that party Venue for any emergency action...Confused

Other than that all comes Classical, Your Words, Dialogues, Scene, Sequences, Characters, Connection, Execution, What I said man...ClapClapClap

I always want to Learn Something from Ur Stories but except Admiration and Inspiration, did not get anything Till...OuchOuchOuch

Thank you so much Writer for such a Treat, masterpiece for all those who wanted to Read Something which takes them really in a New Horizon...StarStarStar 

Agaian I apologize if Hurt the Writer or His fans or anyone, its just My Point of View... DEMONSTAR Personally I say Sorry, if U feel anything Bad/sad with My any Comments...Smile


Edited by gadhadada - 17 June 2013 at 12:04pm

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Posted: 16 June 2013 at 7:56am | IP Logged

Story no: 4


I think I know the Writer, in my opinion Story Written by PADDMA but not sure about it...Big smile

I love the Start, its really Nice to start any story in that way...Clap

Then Girls Mysterious appearence at Specific Area...Wink

Somehow I did not accept that DUO be there but showing Some Suspecious Behaviour ...Confused

that Scene was really Shocking as well Strong in sense when PURVI comes inside DUO room, the Silence really feel all the Pain...StarClapStar

SHERYA call, ABHIJEET Sir and PURVI Fight, everything going good...Clap

Somehow I was not convincing that how did Goons threw REKHA from the car, alright if they took the Deadbody but when they threw it as They did not Stop their car, Slow down as SACHIN, FREDDIE and PURVI behind them na so if Goons threw anything outside, they knew about that...ConfusedConfused

I like that writer Included not Batting but some other Strong bad works of RAGHAV too... ClapClap

Thank you so much...Embarrassed

No hard/Sad/Bad feelings on my Reviews, its only GD Point of Views...Smile



Edited by gadhadada - 17 June 2013 at 3:18am

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I was go through all Posted Stories till and as well giving my reviews too...EmbarrassedClap


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