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Posted story no 2. Smile

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Posted: 11 June 2013 at 8:17am | IP Logged

STORY no: ONE

I read Story No 1, A nice try by the Writer, I love the way of using Female Cops in such a way...Clap

Excillent Attitudes showed by Female Cops...Clap

The Plot was well Handled and Gripped...Clap

I like as Every Character was Placed with Backups and Apt Manner...Clap

somehow I found the Story was Lenthy and Bit Confusing...Ouch

I did not understand why NAQSH told all to TINA?...Confused

 Also confuse that is NAQSH did not know that TINA trapped Him at the End too..Confused

 I know Loopholes are there, but I enjoyed that Story...Embarrassed

It's Crisp with some Bold Language but somehow justified the Theme upto some Extent...Clap

lovely Piece of Work...Embarrassed

Thank You...Big smile

No hard/Sad/Bad feelings on my Reviews, its only GD Point of Views...Smile



Edited by gadhadada - 17 June 2013 at 3:16am

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Posted: 11 June 2013 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Reviews on Story No. 1

Nice try by the writer... I can the writer really did hard work for this..
Though the theme was a bit boring a tough but here this story seemed interesting to me.
I loved how the writer distributed the team and how made it according to the theme..

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Posted: 11 June 2013 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DUOlover123

Reviews on Story No. 1

Nice try by the writer... I can the writer really did hard work for this..
Though the theme was a bit boring a tough but here this story seemed interesting to me.
I loved how the writer distributed the team and how made it according to the theme..


Thanks..

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Posted: 12 June 2013 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

Originally posted by DUOlover123

Reviews on Story No. 1

Nice try by the writer... I can the writer really did hard work for this..
Though the theme was a bit boring a tough but here this story seemed interesting to me.
I loved how the writer distributed the team and how made it according to the theme..


Thanks..
ROFL vis di...
...@*#*#*#*@(@(@*#(#(
I'll love to read the stories asap, posted to mark the thread too.SmileTongue

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Posted: 12 June 2013 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Will read all the stories soon

gadhadada

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Posted: 12 June 2013 at 11:03am | IP Logged

Story no 2...

I read this Story today... I think its written by SUHANI DII, but I m not sure abt that...Confused

The Story starts with casual and then panning and stretching...Clap

Excillent use of Team members as Cut off all the EXTRA characters just to Focus on Theme...ClapStarClap

PURVI and SHERYA, well done job as an ESCORT, either I find it little BOLD but as We know the Subject must got that shade and in some extent on Limelight too...Clap

I love the Male Members Concern towards the Female Cops...Embarrassed

Somehow the way NIHAAL opened His PC without password, and the Explaination which was given by Him was Meaningless...Ouch

His caught was also a Little Filmy...LOL

I love the way CID engaged in TAJ HOTEL room # 1003, Lovely ppiece of Work by Writer...Star

The way Female Cops did their BOLD Role was really Portrayed Very well...ClapClapClap

Why SHERYA and PURVI taken Juice, its quite Risky as JAI might be using any Drugs on it...Wink

I have a Confusion as all 4 Culprits at end confessed all in Drunk Phase either their Confession was Recorded but Could they will not tell at Court that CID Team took their Confession by using any Pills in Wine...ConfusedConfusedConfused

All and all an Excillent attempt by the Writer...ClapClap

Lovely Justification with the Theme and Subject Line...ClapClapClap

Thank you Writer and If find any Hard Feelings with My Review, I Apologize in Advance...Smile



Edited by gadhadada - 17 June 2013 at 3:17am

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Posted: 13 June 2013 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Posted story no 3...Smile

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