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misha.as

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Story No 3 -

This is an amazing story...Star Clap
Excellent writing...Clap
Research, investigation, writing, everything is awesome... Star Clap
The characters were discribed very well. Clap
It was simply mindblowing...Smile
Great...Star Clap
I like it...Smile


Story No 4 -

I really enjoyed reading the story...Smile
A lovely story.Star Clap
The starting was really nice with mysterious girl. Clap
Poorvi and Shreya did a great job and Duo too...Star Clap
Great work...Clap
I love it...Smile



All the Best...Thumbs Up
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Where's others Reviews... At least Voting tou kr do yaar...Unhappy

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 7:16am | IP Logged
One reader has sent anonymous reviews. Here they are
 
 
Story 1- Quite interesting! The story flow was good, despite certain grammatical errors. Very long and the end seems to be rushed up. Good attempt!

Story 2- Quite fast paced and started with action. Well thought out but as the story moved, lost focus in the middle. But the action was well plotted! Keep it up!

Story 3- Really sporty and fast paced. The theme was well plotted and the plot had bold and beautiful touches! James Bond style lag raha tha. Though i did get confused wt so many names and twists. it was a splendid attempt!

Story 4- Nice flow of the story, and the dialogues were interesting! But I was confused at many places. It was as if I was watching a film! Good touches here and there! The plot was well thought out! Great attempt!

Story 5- Another James Bond style story! Very edgy and fast paced and bold story, and full of twists and turns. It wasnt difficult to guess who was who wen it came to purvi and duo! but the others were difficult to guess! Wonderfully written!

Story 6- A blooper i feel- CID belongs to Mumbai. I mean the show that we watch is based on Mumbai CID. so how come tickets to mumbai? Bringing in hockey was a nice idea. But a clarification regarding this blooper is required! Good story and good writing.
 
 
 
My own comment:
 
I have received marks from 8 members so far. And I am very very disappointed that only one of the writers has sent in marks.
 
Others, please read up the stories and send the marks ASAP. 4 days left.


Edited by visrom - 26 June 2013 at 7:17am

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Finished story no 3. Wow...full of action and thrill. Surprised how story writer 1 and 3 both thought of hidden camera in earring. LOL
 
I love reading this writer's stories because it's so full of action...I feel like I am reading an English novel. Lot of research has gone into this story...it's definitely not a one-day effort. Very well done. Big smileThumbs Up

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Feeling very sorry that till now i could not read a single story Ouch even winner siggy is not at all ready Ouch (i will try to make it soon)
So sorry...

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Continuing my reviews 
Good luck to all participants Thumbs Up

Story 4 - Naari Special 

The story was really fab. You made it thrilling and suspenseful. I loved how you narrated it you done it nicely. The dialogues were really good too but i think it should have been more bold. The portrayal of Purvi and Shreya was excellent and I definitely how they bravely go on to handle the case even though they know its dangerous. Every single scene you written very nicely and described it well and I loved Abhi and Daya's talk in the car. It showed there human side. Overall a mind blowing story as i liked how you kept everyone involved.

 

Story 5 - The sting of the three W's

Your style writing made the story fab as it was was nicely described. Loved Purvi's character it was done up decently and i loved her and Shreya's action scene. Abhi sir's interaction with Purvi was very sweet. Again showed the human side. Shreya's role was sidelined.I think you should have given her a larger scope to perform on though, Just my opinion. The dialogues were really bold but set up in good way that i could imagine what's happening.

 

Story 6 - Mysterious game

Your concept was fab really liked the idea of hockey as it was different from other people's story. The plot was also good. I simply loved Purvi and Shreya's disguise scene but it was really short you should have expanded on it. Everyone else was given decent role to play in your story and I really think you did justice to your concept. A fab story hope to see more stories in different concepts from you. Keep writing .


Overall every single story was fab.

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Story :- 5

Liked the beginning...Clap
Shanaya character was really great...Star
The anagram idea was awesome...Clap Clap
Abhi sir's interaction with Purvi was very sweet...StarClap
The girls and team did a great job...Star
Liked the ending...Clap
It was really nice...Clap
Thumbs Up Thumbs Up



Story :-6

Nice beginning with the call on Poorvi's cell...Clap
The plot was very good... Star Clap
I love the way Poorvi handled Freddie Sir...Star Clap
I simply loved Purvi and Shreya's disguise scene...Clap
The story was nice to read and the dialogues... Star Clap
Liked the ending...Clap
Well done.Clap Clap
Thumbs Up Thumbs Up


Overall great work everyone ...Star StarClap
Welldone...Clap Clap
All the very best to u all...Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up
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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

 
 
My own comment:
 
I have received marks from 8 members so far. And I am very very disappointed that only one of the writers has sent in marks.
 
Others, please read up the stories and send the marks ASAP. 4 days left.

its really a sad News...Cry

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