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FF- True bonds of love, Chapter-8 (Pg- 15)

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Posted: 09 June 2013 at 4:23am | IP Logged
 FF - True bonds of Love

I am writing another fanfic, well, the earlier one was complete suspense-thriller, but this time, its pure Mithvi stuff.Embarrassed Embarrassed  Hope you like it. And don't mind any mistakes in my hindi, I am real bad at it Tongue  Okok...on with the story. Big smile

Chapter-1

On a beautiful summer night, Meera woke up suddenly looking dazed. 

That face...

A lovely smile crept on her face. It was the same dream again. She saw him again.

Rustic and charmingly unsophisticated as he was, his clean-cut features and smile which never failed to captivate her in her dreams.  His soulful dark brown eyes spoke volumes. They were cold yet delicate, mysterious yet warm. The most noticed feature, his large manly moustache.

His strong arms felt protective. 

 If God allowed, she would dream about him forever. It was as if there was some invisible force pulling her towards him.

Pulling off the sheets, Meera got up and put on the bedside lamp. She took a seat on one of the upholstered chair by her study table. She hastily opened the drawer and fished out a paper and pen and scribbled.

His head resting on the cushion of his hands, Prithvi fixed his gaze at the buoyant white clouds floating in the pristine blue sky. 

Strong breeze blew making the verdant trees in the village of Barahgaon shake. Prithvi got up. He mind suddenly drifted to a certain someone. He wondered how many years had gone by since he last saw her in person.

Meera, looked at the paper which showed fresh ink. Reading her writing, her lips formed a cute smile.

Harr din, harr raat
Tumhari yadein satati hai...Kahan ho tum Prithvi...

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How is it guys???

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Chapter-4

chapter5

chapter6

chapter7

chapter8(new)




Edited by SuperChillz1 - 23 July 2013 at 8:07am

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Awesome May!!!ClapClapClapClapClapBig smileThumbs UpI was sent off to Mithviland...Day DreamingThank u for dis new FF!HugPlz go on!M already eager for the next chapter!!!Big smileTongue

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Posted: 09 June 2013 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Love it, too short though. Id love to read more :-) please update soon!! Mithviland is so beautiful !

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Pure MITHVI stuff...bring it on, all ready for itWink

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Day DreamingOhhh May, Jaan le li yaar tune,ufff... Super romantic , can't wait ..
They are already in love ... Haaye... 
CVs, where are u???
Read this , this is what we want to see, awesome

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Posted: 09 June 2013 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Very lovely ..

Prithvi and Meera are exchanging letters?

They are separated?

What happened in the past ?

So many questions crossed my mind .
You dear friend know how to make my heart and mind busy. Big smile

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Aise dheere dheere likh kar kyun maar rahe ho yaar!!! Jaldi jaldi do na saare chapters!!! Pls cant wait.


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wow awesome...Clap

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