~FF~ Muskaan khushiyon ki chabhi~ch9pg.28

Posted: 10 years ago
                                                    muskaan khushiyon ki chabhi πŸ˜³

hey guys πŸ˜†
main bhi apna 1st FF likhne ja rahi hoon πŸ˜†hope aap sabko pasand aayega nahi bhi ayega to sannu ki main to likhungi πŸ€£ 
my 1st FF is about rishi πŸ˜³
iss ff ke characters ka hd se koi lena dena nahi hai ye sab bas mere dimag ki upaz hai πŸ˜†
 
 mona presenting muskaan khushiyon ki chabhi πŸ˜†
 dhanyawad πŸ˜†
Edited by -dear10- - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago


rishi- ek hotel ka malik or mere ff ka hero πŸ˜³
mamta- muskan anath ashram ki malkin or rishi ki mom.
inder- old worker muskan anath ashram ka.
ishan- asram ka sabse bada bachchaπŸ˜†
divya- ashram ki dusri badi bachcha πŸ˜†
  soniera- happy go lucky and thodi stupidπŸ˜†
baki baad main likhungi πŸ˜†


chapter 1  - page  1 
chapter 2 - page  4
chapter 3 - page  8
chapter 4 - page  12
chapter 5 - page  14
chapter 6  page 19
Edited by -dear10- - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
                                 muskaan khushiyon ki chabhi 

chapter 1

mamta diwan ek anath ashram ki malkin jinke 2 bachche hai aur pati ki 2 saal pehle accident main mout ho gayi hai.her muskan anath ashram shimla main hai.mamta diwan apni car main beth kar apne muskan anathshram pohchi kafi raat ho gayi thi unko kuch kaam tha tabhi unhone ek bachche ke rone ki awaaz suni wo awaz ko sunte hue aage badhi to unhone dekha ki ashram ke bahar kisi ne ek  chhote bachche ko chhod rakha tha . bachche ko dekh kar mamta ne use apne goud main utha liya or use andar le gayi bacha bohat cute tha uski hari ankhen roshni main or chamak rahi thi use apni goud main lekar mamta ka mann nahi kiya usko ashram main chhodneka wo use apne sath ghar le aayi wese to mamta apne ashram ke sabhi bachcho ko bohat pyaar karti hai. bachche ka naam mamta ne Rishi rakha Rishi diwan unka sabse chhota beta ban gaya . mamta ji ke bachche bade the or unko rishi ka unke sath rehna pasand nahi tha isliye mamta ne  rishi ko khud se door kar diya or hostel bhej diya or wo uski padhai likhai ka kharchha khud uthati thi or har mahine rishi ko chhitthi likhti thi. ese hi 25 saal beet gaye iss beech rishi or uski mom ki mulakaat kayi baar huyi kayi baar rishi ko apne bhaiyo ki khari khoti bhi sunni padi uske bhai malhaar or roshan use bilkul bhi pasand nahi karte the. 
rishi delhi main rehta hai or wo ek hotel ka malik ha jiska naam usne little dream rakha hai uska business acha chal raha hai par wo akela hai khush nahi hai uske bhaiyo ke rawiye ne use bhi kathor bana diya hai wo kisi ke sath emotionaly judna nahi chahta isliye kabhi kabhi bohat rude ho jata hai.par aaj bhi apni ma se bohat pyaar karta hai or uski chhitthi ka intzaar karta hai jo 2 saal se use nahi mil rahi hai.
hotel ke aage car rukti hai sabhi or sare karamchari alert ho jate hai jese army ka koi brigadier aa raha ho inko left right karwane ke liye .car ke darwaze open hue or black suit with white sirt main black  tie pehne hue ek ladka nikla jo baar baar apni watch ko dekhe ja raha tha wo lift ki taraf badh raha hai sab use greet kar rahe hai wo lift main chala gaya or phir apne cabin main chala gaya or kaam main lag gaya uski chai ke saamne bada mirror laga tha jisper uska reflecton aa raha tha ten tena  Mr. rishi diwan littele dream ke maalik jo files padhne main busy hai. tabhi achanak koi unke door ko nok karta hai.
rishi-coming.
ohh ye to hotel ke GM subramanyam hai .
rishi - Mr. iyyer aaiye boliye kya jawaab hai aapke paas kitne baje mujhe aapka jawab milega.
iyyer- sir dekhiye.
rishi- file patakte hue dekhne ka time gaya Mr.iyyer guest mujhtak aaye kese aapne pehle hi unki problem solve kyon nahi ki problem itni badi huyi kese ki mujh tak baat pohchi kese bataiye.
iyyer- sir maine puri koshish ki or guest ki problem half hour se pehle solve ho gayi thi sir dobara esa nahi hoga.
rishi-hoga bhi to main hone nahi dunga ye last warning hai aapke liye ise mazaak matt samajhiyega.
iyyer- ji sir thank you sir.
rishi window ke paas khada hai or kuch soch raha hai tabhi usne bhaagte hue apna desk check kiya wahan ek letter rakha hua tha jisper uska dhyaan nahi gaya tha une letter uthaya or uss letter ko dekh kar uska cement jese chehre par smile aa gayi usne jhant se letter khola or padhne jese jese wo letter padh raha tha uski ankhon main aansu  behte ja rahe the letter main likha tha ki ma letter likhti thi par koi unhe post nahi karta tha ab wo muskan ashram main hi rehti hai isliye ye letter bhej rahi hai wo rishi se milna chahti hai akhri baar kyonki unki tabiyat bohat kharb hai. 
ye padh kar rishi rishi ne turant apna phone uthaya or sari meeting cancel karwai or shimla ke liye apne ticket book karwaye wo hotel se bhaagte hue ghar ke nikla uska sara staf use ese dekh kar heraan tha wo apne ghar pohcha usne apna samaan pack kiya or noukar ko ye bolker ki main bahar ja raha hoon week ke liye koi poochhe to bata dena. or wo shimla ke liye nikal gaya .

Edited by -dear10- - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks A Lot πŸ˜ƒ
 
 
 
 
πŸ˜ƒ Eh   πŸ˜ƒ Why ? ❓ πŸ˜ƒ  Fine, Great πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
haaye itni dukh bhari kahani hai rk ki😭
awesome updateπŸ˜ƒ
next update kab milega?πŸ˜†
Posted: 10 years ago
wow di bahot mast ff hain πŸ‘. Waise humare hero ke heroine ki entry kab hogi?

aur update kab degi agla?
Edited by Ketaki19 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by FAR.N


haaye itni dukh bhari kahani hai rk ki😭
awesome updateπŸ˜ƒ
next update kab milega?πŸ˜†
dukhi to hai πŸ˜† 
dungi jald hi πŸ˜† likh rahi hoon πŸ˜‰
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Ketaki19


wow di bahot mast ff hain πŸ‘. Waise humare hero ke heroine ki entry kab hogi?

aur update kab degi agla?
abhi bata doon sab tujhe πŸ˜†
πŸ€—
jaldi dungi πŸ˜†
Posted: 10 years ago
Wow..dis is gr8 start.. πŸ‘
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by -dear10-



dukhi to haiπŸ˜†
dungi jald hiπŸ˜†likh rahi hoonπŸ˜‰
dukh bhari kahani mein main killer smile aur jaanlewa aankhen imagine kar lungi
ok likho-likho araam se likhoπŸ˜†

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