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Suraj hua madham 4 sujal-kash (Page 7)

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jasmine dear sorry me could not comment for the last two parts... Cry now coming to your story...it is very damn nice.. i like it very very very very very much.....u keep up the good work... Clap
i liked the way sujal threw charu down..mazaa aagaya.... LOL     tho ab charu ka boy friend has come..that's nice.. i wish karthik charu   ko sujal se durr rakhe.... Wink waise me have a question why does charu hate karthik..she can go to karthik instead of spoiling sujal ,kashish's life... par yeh baat charu ke samaj mein kab aayegi.. when will she get akal... Dead
tho now karthik has kidnapped charu.. i feel sorry for charu... & i think charu & karthik should get married.. aur agar aisa ho gaya tho sujal kashish bhi apne zindagi mein khush reh sakthe hain.... Big smile ab please jaldi se continue karna...me will be waiting for the next part... Big smile


Edited by sun_423 - 15 August 2006 at 3:27am
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Posted: 15 August 2006 at 7:49am | IP Logged
hey jasmine really nice part plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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please continue soon jasmine me waiting eagerly for the next part... Tongue
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Part 14 Charu screams at karthik:why did u do dis 2 me?
C slaps him manytimes.K is upset.

All r tensed not seeing C back.C cums.Kashish:where were u?
K cries & hugs K:di,I'm spoilt
K:what?
C:karthik raped me
K & Sujal r shocked.

C is shattered completely.she's continuously shedding tears.K is comforting her.C falls asleep.

K cries on S's chest:den also how did it happen 2 my lovly sister.wenever she told abt karthik's character I did'nt believe her.but I was wrong.i cud'nt save my sister
S's eyes r ful of tears.S is going crazy.

S goes 2 C's room.C is weeping:I got punished jeeju
S:why don't u marry karthik?
C:after happening this much also u want me 2 marry him?how cud u think so?bcuz u hate me?
S:no.u remember once I came late.dat day I went 2 c him.its bcuz I told him he came 2 mumbai
C is shocked:what?
S:I came 2 no abt karthik who luvs u very much.wen i enquired abt him I realized dat he's a nice man.he suits u.so I went 2 him.i introduced myself 2 him.his rooms were decorated with ur photos.i saw his luv directly.i asked him why he's not marrying u if he luvs u like crazy.he was very upset 2 tel dat u avoids him.i told him 2 marry u.he said,he does'nt hav hope as u hate him.i told him 2 express his luv 2 u.but he realized dat dere is no use of it as however he expresses his luv u neglect him.so I yold him even 2 force u,2 compel u 2 marry him.but I never thot dat he'l do dis 2 u 2 gain u.i'm sorry charu
C cries:don't b sorry

Suryaban-gayatri cum & hug C with tears after cuming 2 no what happened 2 her
S:2morrow we r taking her back
C cums near kashish:di,shal I sleep with u as it's the last chance
K weeps:why r u talking like dis?

C-K in the bedroom. C:u r very lucky 2 get a gud husband like jeeju.he's the best husband
K:dat I no b4 itself no
C:no,u donno anything.now I'm going 2 reveal how nice he's

WIL CHARU CONFES?HOW'L KASHISH REACT?
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Posted: 16 August 2006 at 7:02pm | IP Logged
keep it up jasmine....i hope kash kicks her outta her house...
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Posted: 17 August 2006 at 8:21am | IP Logged
jasmine dear a toooo gooddd part..i liked it very damn much.... i felt sorry for charu..but in all a very intresting part...i liked reading it very much....you keep up the good work....the part was wonderful... Clap
hmm..me getting angry on karthik...how could he do such a thing to the girl he loves... Angry tho finally charu has realized her mistake & said sorry to sujal...Thank GOD....kuch tho akal aayi charu mein.... Big smile kashish's parents have come to take charu back...i think it is better you unite charu with karthik instead of taking her back.. Wink hey but now charu wants to confess everything to kashish....i hope kashish does not behave badly or rudely.... Big smile
please continue soon..me will be waiting for the next part... Big smile dear aur jahaan thak rahi baat the part u sent to me that was also very damn coollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll..
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Edited by sun_423 - 17 August 2006 at 8:24am
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please continue jasmine dear... Cry

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