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Suraj hua madham 4 sujal-kash (Page 6)

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Part 11 Kashish:Charu!
C is shocked:di
K:why r u catching sujal's feet?
C:who told u dat I'm catching jeeju's feet?I'm taking the pearls dat fel on his feet
K:Oh!I thot u r ..
C takes the pearls. K:why r u here now sujal?
S stammers:me…I …came 2 drink water
K:ok,cum & sleep.dis crazy girl sleeps during midnite
K goes.S follows her.S turns back.C's eyes r burning.

S is sitting on bed.C hugs him from back.S smiles & catches her arm.den he sees C's arm & leaves it.
S is shocked 2 c C:u?I thot its cum u here in our bedroom?
C:2 c u.2 giv u a passionate hug
S:how dare u touch me!I feel uncomfortable wen u touch me
C smiles:no jeeju.u r lying.u loved it.eventho u thot its di's hug u enjoyed my hug
S is stunned. C smiles:a sweet hug.this is enuf 4 me
C goes.S is irritated

C 2 K:di,I want 2 shop
K:I don't hav time.u go with sujal
S shouts:why r u always leaving us alone?why don't u hav no time?
K:I've 2 make food
S:why ur life is always made up 2 prepare food?
K:whatelse can I do?I'm not educated like my sister.i can do only this
S:u r my wife.i don't want my wife 2 finish ur life in a kitchen.we'l keep a servant
K:wen im there no need of a servant
Sbut kashish..   K:no back answering
S:ok.but wenever we r going out,u shud also b there with us
K:ok,I'l cum with u 2
S smiles.C stares at S:now I don't hav mood 2 shop
C goes inside her room.K:suddenly what happened 2 her?
S smiles.

C is very angry wen lying on the bed.Suddenly she gets up seeing S entering her room.
C:I no why u came here.2 shout at u plz go.there is no use.i'l not change
S:I came here 2 apologize.i'm sorry
S's fingers go thru C's face.C 4gets herself & hugs him tightly:I new dat 1 day my dream wil b fulfilled
They've sizzling dance 2 aashiq banaya…
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Posted: 13 August 2006 at 7:52am | IP Logged
jasmine dear very nice part.. i really love reading your story.. it is damn intresting... i love the twists & turns you give.... everytime you give a new twist , the twists are so different for the earlier ones & with the twists your story gets more more intresting , wonderful ,too good , nice... Clap the part was simply keep up the good work... Clap
i really hate charu...she is not even eyeing her sister's husband but also has the guts to lie to her sister....agar charu meri saamne aa gayi tho me surely will kill her...itna ghussa aa raha hain mujhe uspe... Angry kashish is so innocent..bechari.. Cry
tho now why has sujal come to charu..that's very bad... why is sujal cheating on kashish.. Dead    but i somewhere have a feeling that charu is dreaming.. i wish it would be a dream.. i think it is a dream kyunke sujal aisa kabhi nahi karega....Wink ab please jaldi se continue karna.. me will be eagerly waiting for the next part... Big smile

Edited by sun_423 - 13 August 2006 at 7:56am
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 August 2006 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Part12       Kashish:ok,b ring it bak
Sujal:what nonsense!
K:charu u go & place it
C smiles at S & goes.
S:whT DID U TEL?I CANT push it 4 charu.she's crazy
K:she is stil childish.don't care.plz fulfil her small wish
S:kashish,I cant
K forces:plz..

C places the swinging chair & sits on it.she luks at S.S slowly pushes it 4 her 2 swing.K smiles.C has a victory's smile.K goes.S pushes it harshly.So C falls down.
S smiles:don't try 2 b oversmart
S goes.C is irritated.

S cums bak in late nite.K:why did u becum late?
S:meeting was dere
K:ok,cum & sleep.u r tired.
K goes. C:I no dat u did'nt go 4 any meeting.where did u go?
S:2 a prostitute
C laughs:u'l never do dat
S:why not?
S goes.C smiles.

C cums bak after her class.she waits 4 a taxi.finaly she gets into1.she's thinking abt her moments with S.she did'nt no dat the driver was driving 2 a wrong place.
C gets out & realizes dat its not the place:whats dis?dis is not my place.u r mistaken.drop me 2 my place.u cant get money after dropping me 2 a wrong place
C gets in.Driver luks at her.C is shocked
He smiles. C is angry:u?u wanted 2 trap me as a fake driver?dat'l never happen
C tries 2 open the door 2 go out.but he catches her hand so tightly dat she cant do so

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gr8 goin...
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Part13   Charu:Karthik,leave my hand
K:no,u can go only after I finsh talking 2 u
C:whats dere new 2 tel?
K:nothing new.the same old thing dat I luv u.but as long as u don't listen 2 me,I'l repeat the same thing.i luv u
C:I'm repeating my answer.i hate u
K:but why?I'l try 2 change myself.i'l do whatever u tel
C:no use.i cant never luv a loser like u
C goes.K's eyes get filled up with tears.

C 2 K:karthik has reached mumbai
K was surprised:really?why?
C:the same aim.2 marry me.dat'l never happen
K:but he's a nice boy.he was so sweet wen he came 2 c our dad 2 ask 4 u.but u insulted him
C:r u on his side?
K:no.but he' nice
C shouts:no
K:why r u becoming angry 4 such a silly thing?
C:its not a silly thing 4 me
C goes.K is dull.

K is on her bed.C cums.
K:can u plz bring my medicine
C:why r u treating me like a servant?I did'nt cum here 2 b ur servant.i came here 2 stay here & study
K is upset:why r u talking like this?I did'nt mean dat.if u feel so,den I wont desturb u anymore
K gets up & goes 2 take medicines.C feels quilty:sorry di.i'l bring medicines
K smiles & thinks:charuhas changed a I cant understand her

While C was walking on the road,karthik kidnaps her.he sprays sumthing on her nose.she fals asleep.
C is sleeping on the bed.she opens her eyes.was shocked 2 c karthik near her on the bed.

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