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Suraj hua madham 4 sujal-kash (Page 5)

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 August 2006 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Part12       Kashish:ok,b ring it bak
Sujal:what nonsense!
K:charu u go & place it
C smiles at S & goes.
S:whT DID U TEL?I CANT push it 4 charu.she's crazy
K:she is stil childish.don't care.plz fulfil her small wish
S:kashish,I cant
K forces:plz..

C places the swinging chair & sits on it.she luks at S.S slowly pushes it 4 her 2 swing.K smiles.C has a victory's smile.K goes.S pushes it harshly.So C falls down.
S smiles:don't try 2 b oversmart
S goes.C is irritated.

S cums bak in late nite.K:why did u becum late?
S:meeting was dere
K:ok,cum & sleep.u r tired.
K goes. C:I no dat u did'nt go 4 any meeting.where did u go?
S:2 a prostitute
C laughs:u'l never do dat
S:why not?
S goes.C smiles.

C cums bak after her class.she waits 4 a taxi.finaly she gets into1.she's thinking abt her moments with S.she did'nt no dat the driver was driving 2 a wrong place.
C gets out & realizes dat its not the place:whats dis?dis is not my place.u r mistaken.drop me 2 my place.u cant get money after dropping me 2 a wrong place
C gets in.Driver luks at her.C is shocked
He smiles. C is angry:u?u wanted 2 trap me as a fake driver?dat'l never happen
C tries 2 open the door 2 go out.but he catches her hand so tightly dat she cant do so


jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 August 2006 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Part13   Charu:Karthik,leave my hand
K:no,u can go only after I finsh talking 2 u
C:whats dere new 2 tel?
K:nothing new.the same old thing dat I luv u.but as long as u don't listen 2 me,I'l repeat the same thing.i luv u
C:I'm repeating my answer.i hate u
K:but why?I'l try 2 change myself.i'l do whatever u tel
C:no use.i cant never luv a loser like u
C goes.K's eyes get filled up with tears.

C 2 K:karthik has reached mumbai
K was surprised:really?why?
C:the same aim.2 marry me.dat'l never happen
K:but he's a nice boy.he was so sweet wen he came 2 c our dad 2 ask 4 u.but u insulted him
C:r u on his side?
K:no.but he' nice
C shouts:no
K:why r u becoming angry 4 such a silly thing?
C:its not a silly thing 4 me
C goes.K is dull.

K is on her bed.C cums.
K:can u plz bring my medicine
C:why r u treating me like a servant?I did'nt cum here 2 b ur servant.i came here 2 stay here & study
K is upset:why r u talking like this?I did'nt mean dat.if u feel so,den I wont desturb u anymore
K gets up & goes 2 take medicines.C feels quilty:sorry di.i'l bring medicines
K smiles & thinks:charuhas changed a I cant understand her

While C was walking on the road,karthik kidnaps her.he sprays sumthing on her nose.she fals asleep.
C is sleeping on the bed.she opens her eyes.was shocked 2 c karthik near her on the bed.
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 15 August 2006 at 3:24am | IP Logged
jasmine dear sorry me could not comment for the last two parts... Cry now coming to your is very damn nice.. i like it very very very very very much.....u keep up the good work... Clap
i liked the way sujal threw charu down..mazaa aagaya.... LOL     tho ab charu ka boy friend has come..that's nice.. i wish karthik charu   ko sujal se durr rakhe.... Wink waise me have a question why does charu hate karthik..she can go to karthik instead of spoiling sujal ,kashish's life... par yeh baat charu ke samaj mein kab aayegi.. when will she get akal... Dead
tho now karthik has kidnapped charu.. i feel sorry for charu... & i think charu & karthik should get married.. aur agar aisa ho gaya tho sujal kashish bhi apne zindagi mein khush reh sakthe hain.... Big smile ab please jaldi se continue will be waiting for the next part... Big smile

Edited by sun_423 - 15 August 2006 at 3:27am
jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 August 2006 at 7:49am | IP Logged
hey jasmine really nice part plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 16 August 2006 at 1:10am | IP Logged
please continue soon jasmine me waiting eagerly for the next part... Tongue
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 August 2006 at 2:37am | IP Logged
Part 14 Charu screams at karthik:why did u do dis 2 me?
C slaps him manytimes.K is upset.

All r tensed not seeing C back.C cums.Kashish:where were u?
K cries & hugs K:di,I'm spoilt
C:karthik raped me
K & Sujal r shocked.

C is shattered completely.she's continuously shedding tears.K is comforting her.C falls asleep.

K cries on S's chest:den also how did it happen 2 my lovly sister.wenever she told abt karthik's character I did'nt believe her.but I was wrong.i cud'nt save my sister
S's eyes r ful of tears.S is going crazy.

S goes 2 C's room.C is weeping:I got punished jeeju
S:why don't u marry karthik?
C:after happening this much also u want me 2 marry him?how cud u think so?bcuz u hate me?
S:no.u remember once I came late.dat day I went 2 c him.its bcuz I told him he came 2 mumbai
C is shocked:what?
S:I came 2 no abt karthik who luvs u very much.wen i enquired abt him I realized dat he's a nice man.he suits I went 2 him.i introduced myself 2 him.his rooms were decorated with ur photos.i saw his luv directly.i asked him why he's not marrying u if he luvs u like crazy.he was very upset 2 tel dat u avoids him.i told him 2 marry u.he said,he does'nt hav hope as u hate him.i told him 2 express his luv 2 u.but he realized dat dere is no use of it as however he expresses his luv u neglect I yold him even 2 force u,2 compel u 2 marry him.but I never thot dat he'l do dis 2 u 2 gain u.i'm sorry charu
C cries:don't b sorry

Suryaban-gayatri cum & hug C with tears after cuming 2 no what happened 2 her
S:2morrow we r taking her back
C cums near kashish:di,shal I sleep with u as it's the last chance
K weeps:why r u talking like dis?

C-K in the bedroom. C:u r very lucky 2 get a gud husband like jeeju.he's the best husband
K:dat I no b4 itself no
C:no,u donno I'm going 2 reveal how nice he's

group_1223 Goldie

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Posted: 16 August 2006 at 7:02pm | IP Logged
keep it up jasmine....i hope kash kicks her outta her house...
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posts: 53584

Posted: 17 August 2006 at 8:21am | IP Logged
jasmine dear a toooo gooddd part..i liked it very damn much.... i felt sorry for charu..but in all a very intresting part...i liked reading it very keep up the good work....the part was wonderful... Clap getting angry on could he do such a thing to the girl he loves... Angry tho finally charu has realized her mistake & said sorry to sujal...Thank GOD....kuch tho akal aayi charu mein.... Big smile kashish's parents have come to take charu back...i think it is better you unite charu with karthik instead of taking her back.. Wink hey but now charu wants to confess everything to kashish....i hope kashish does not behave badly or rudely.... Big smile
please continue will be waiting for the next part... Big smile dear aur jahaan thak rahi baat the part u sent to me that was also very damn coollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll..

Edited by sun_423 - 17 August 2006 at 8:24am

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