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Posted: 08 August 2006 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
jasmine dear a very nice part... your story has a total different concept...& it is getting very very very intresting from part to part....you write very well...keep up the good work.... Thumbs Up jasmine yeh sujal kashish pe ghussa kyun hotha hain ?? woh kyun yeh baat   yaad nahi rakhtha ki kashish is a village girl.. mujhe achcha nahi lagtha jab woh kashish ke saath rudely behave kartha hain...... Dead    
it is good that ab sujal kashish ko city a taur-tarike seekha raha hain... that is seriously very very very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Clap   Clap   ab please jaldi se continue karna.. me will be waiting for the next part..... Big smile


Edited by sun_423 - 08 August 2006 at 9:23pm

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Posted: 08 August 2006 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Part-6    Kashish wears a beautiful maroon sari with matching jewellery & walks like a princess.sujal was surprised.
K:how is it?hav I improved?
S:fantastic.I cant believe that u cud change so fast
K smiles:thanku

They both hold hands 2gether & go 4 a party.K behaves 2 every1 normally.S is happy.
They both do romantic dance 2 suraj hua madham{K3G}

K is cooking in the kitchen.S phones:u go buy sum vegetables.it's the time 4 the vegetable seller 2 cum
K:ok
K goes out & goes near the seller & luk at the vegetables.S goes inside the house without her knowledge.He gets inside the kitchen & starts cooking.There was a big crowd around the seller.So K cant even speak 2 him.Later she cud buy veg & goes inside the house.K goes 2 the kitchen & is shocked 2 see food ready.K:how did it happen?I did'nt finish cooking
Sum1 hugs her from back.K screams.S laughs.K was surprised 2 see him there:how cum u here?
S:I came early.u did'nt no that.don't get scared.i only cooked
K:what was the need?
S:it's a husband's duty 2 help his wife
K smiles.

Next day,K thinks:2day is my b'day.why sujal is not wishing me?
K 2 S b4 going 2 office:did u 4get anything?
S:no   K:r u sure?   G:100% sure
S goes.
K is dull:sujal does'nt think abt me

K was sleeping wen S came back.S smiles.S gets up:u came?sorry,I slept
S:u were very cute while sleeping
K smiles.
S closes K's eyes & takes her 2 another room.he removes his arms from her eyes.K was surprised 2 see a swinging chair.
K:wow!I luv it
K sits there.S swings it

Edited by jasminerahul - 08 August 2006 at 11:27pm

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Posted: 09 August 2006 at 12:36am | IP Logged
jasmine too good , too sweet , too cute... seriously the part was toooooooo niceeeeeeeeeeeee...
i liked it very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Clap
sujal is such a sweetie pie......really   a sweetheart....... Embarrassed it is very good that sujal , kashish her very happy with each other.. i wish unki khushiyo ko kisi ki naraz na lage... Big smile       the part totally rocked...keep up the good work... Thumbs Up please continue soon... Smile Tongue   Big smile


Edited by sun_423 - 09 August 2006 at 12:37am

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Posted: 09 August 2006 at 1:32am | IP Logged
nice part...

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Posted: 09 August 2006 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Part 7
Sujal:how is it?
Kashish:very nice.swinging like a birdůso sweet
S-K smile.
They go 2 the bedroom. K:I never thot u wil gift me such a sweet thing
S keeps his arms on her face:bcoz I luv u
K is shy.They fall on bed.

Morning.sujal-kashish r sleeping on bed.K gets up & opens the door 2 get milk from the milkman.
Then she goes 2 bath.Some1 gets inside their house.That person closes K's bathroom door & S's bedroom.
After bathing,K tries 2 open the door.but she fails.
K:I no sujal closed this 2 make fun
K smiles.Suddenly S opens the door & gets in & luks at K.K is shy.S hugs her.
Suddenly she realizes that it's a dream.
K:sujal,don't try 2 trick me.open the door
S opens his eyes & gets up from the bed. S:which door she's talking abt?
S tries 2 open his door.but he cant.
S:whats this?
He hears K shouting:sujal,I'm losing my patience.open the door
S feels strange:sumthing is wrong
S:kashish,even my door is closed.i'm not joking.sumthing is wrong.sum1 has entered our house
K is shocked:what?
K is scared:Oh my god.sujal,r u ok?
S:yes.don't get scared

WHO'S THAT PERSON?

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Posted: 09 August 2006 at 6:38pm | IP Logged
i guess itz charu....i dunno where i got ths idea 4m...jus a wild guess....

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Posted: 10 August 2006 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Wink

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Posted: 10 August 2006 at 4:18am | IP Logged
jasmine dear a very nice part.. i like sujal , kashish together.. they are very sweet when they are together..Thumbs Up     hmm.. tho sujal ,kashish ke ghar par koi aaya hain    i think it's charu & nobody else...charu is having some fun that's all....kyun am'i right ???? Wink      dear woh joh koi bhi ho tum dekhlena ki woh sujal ,kashish ke khushhaal zindagi mein dhakl na de..... Big smile agar kissine ne bhi unki zindahi tabaa karna    ki koshish ki tho mujhse bura koi nahi hoga....   Angry ab please jaldi se continue karna.. me will be waiting... Big smile

Edited by sun_423 - 10 August 2006 at 4:28am

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