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jasmine dear a very nice part...i liked reading it very much..keep up the good work... Clap      dear so why is sujal behaving so rudely with kashish.. that's very bad........ Dead      par agar sujal ke side se socha jaye tho uska ghussa hona jayiz hain kashish ne kaise uspe shak kiya.. very very very very very very very very very badddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.
Angry please kabhi bhi sujal ,kashish ke beech duriyaan na paida karna..plz....... Tongue
now please continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly...... Big smile


Edited by sun_423 - 07 August 2006 at 4:50am

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Part-4..Kashish:why r u getting angry?do u get angry like this?
Sujal was ruf:yes,I become angry
K:but its 4 the 1st time u became angry after our marriage
S:that's bcoz of ur..
S goes 2 sleep.K is upset.

Next morning.
S:pack the bags.we r going 2 a place
K:where?
S:no question.do what I say
K:ok
K thinks:suddenly what happened 2 sujal?always angry

S-K in the car. K:u don't hav a house right?then where r we going?
S is silent. K:sujal!
S:why r u always keeping ur mouth open?just close it 4 sumtime
K is upset:sorry.since childhood I'm like this.i talk foolish things
S:ok ok

They reach a place. S:cum out & luk carefully
K was surprised 2 c a house:whats this?
S:I was on the construction of a new house 4 u.4 both of us 2 stay 2gether.i was planning 2 giv u a big surprise
K smiles:I got scared
S smiles:open the door   K:u do it
S:no,u must do it as I believe that only if u do that luck wil cum
K smiles & opens the door.they hold hands 2gether & get inside.
K:wow!so beautiful
K is surprised 2 see lots of her framed photos kept there:how did u get al these?
S:I got it from ur dad.actually I keep these photos with me as seeing these only I fell in luv with u
K is shy.a carries her in his arms & keeps her on the bed. S:this is our bed
S lies down close 2 her.They both smile

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Posted: 07 August 2006 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
jasmine dear a toooo goodddddddd part.... the part was very very very very very very very very very   coolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllllllllllllllll
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Thumbs Up      dear sujal is such a sweetheart... he takes kashish to their new home that's shoooooo sweettttt of him... Embarrassed yeh kashish tho khammaka hi shak karthi rehthi hain...uski tho aadat hain... Dead lekin me happy that sujal ne usse ghalat sabit kiya by taking her to their new house.....he is the BEST.... Clap    good that sujal & kashish are happy with each other....sujal ke ghar mein poore kashish ke pics hain.......very very very nice.... Big smile ab please jaldi se continue karna..me eagerly waiting for the next part as i want to know what does the future have in store for sujal & kashish... Big smile


Edited by sun_423 - 07 August 2006 at 8:33pm

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Part-5    Sujal-kashish go 2 an icecream parlour.Waiter cums.
S:1 chocobar
K:1 Anila
W:Anila?whats that?
K:icecream.i've eaten this b4.its white.its like a ball
W:Ma'am its vanila
K is embarrassed:sorry.u r right
W goes. S:whats this kashish?atleast u shud no the icecream's name
K:I'l learn
S smiles.

They both go 4 a big party.K has worn an orange sari with matching jewellary.
1 guy cums:HI Sujal
G:hi
They both hug. He extends his hand 2 K.K feels awkward:whats this?I don't like other men touching my hand.its so stupid.sujal,why do u want such friendships?
He is dull & S is embarrassed.He goes.S follows him:sorry yaar.my wife is from a village.she is narrow minded
He:its ok.i understand.but I never thot that a highly qualified man like u wud marry an uneducated village girl
S is dull.S holds K's hand tightly & take her 2 car.
K:why r we going back soon?the party started only now
S:but its enuf
K:ya,I also felt the party boring & also the men there r disgusting
S stops the car & is angry:they r not disgusting.but u r
K is shocked:u r blaming me?but he..
S:just stop it.now u r in city married 2 a man who's completely modern.don't b so traditional
K:but he tried 2 catch my hand
S:its common here.he did'nt mean it.just 2 shake hand.its not bad.it's a friendly affection
K's eyes rose:sorry
S feels sad:its ok.i just lost my control.sorry
K:u don't hav 2 say sorry.its my fault.u teach me how 2 behave in parties.i'l do that
S smiles.

S teaches K how 2 walk & how 2 dance in parties

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Posted: 08 August 2006 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
awesome!! very good Clap Clap Clap

Edited by lil miz - 08 August 2006 at 12:50pm

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kewl story n a brilliant concept...

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