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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 5:25pm | IP Logged
Another OS for the Writing Contest. Will be posting an FF in a few days. Please do hit like! Link to my Production House: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3385360


This is Sunaina Kapoor

This is Sunaina Kapoor and this is her story.

She dusted her son off even as the watchman starred at her in surprise. Why was he starring at her like that? Hadn't he ever seen a mother care for her son? She looked away and helped her son get up. He ran up the stairs to their flat on the third level, while she picked up all the bags and followed him up slowly.

The watchman looked after her weirdly. She was such a weird gal. She always acted like she had a son, but he had never seen this son of hers. Even now when she had helped him up and started dusting him off he hadn't seen anyone there. Were his eyes playing tricks or was she mad? He shook his head and went back to work. What did he care? He was being paid to look after the building and its tenants even if some of them were weird.

She wasn't mad. She wasn't weird either. She was just in depression. 2 years ago her son had died in an accident along with her husband. She had been in that car as well and had gone into coma. A year ago when she finally came out of coma and heard the news she had gone into shock. To bring her out of shock, the doctors had told her lie after lie and she came to believe that her son was still alive.

As she opened the lock of her flat, she realized that she couldn't remember which key fit the lock anymore. Not that it mattered. She didn't remember a lot of things nowadays. She had forgotten her name as well. Whenever people called out "Sunaina" it always took her a few moments before she realized that she was being called. She forgot even simple things like brushing her teeth or eating. Once she hadn't eaten for 3 days because she had simply forgotten if she had eaten or not. When she went into the kitchen on the 3rd day and saw the spoilt food on the counter she realized that she probably hadn't eaten for several days.

One of these days she would probably fall off the stairs or down her balcony simply because she forgot that they were dangerous and that would be the end of her. She finally got the lock open and her son impatiently pushed past her. He was always in such a rush. She called out, "Mohit slow down!"

She put the bags on the table, locked the door, and then slowly started sorting the stuff. She mumbled to herself, "This bag has vegetables in it. Vegetables go in the kitchen and then into the fridge. This bag has toys in it. This is for Mohit. It needs to go in his room'" She continued mumbling to herself as she worked and slowly she was able to put everything away. Then she went in search of Mohit.

Mohit was standing in the balcony playing. She ran over to him just as his ball bounced off the ledge and to the courtyard. Mohit started crying and without thinking jumped off the ledge to get his ball. She yelled, "Mohit!" Looking down she didn't see Mohit anywhere. She stood up on the ledge and started looking around as well. People walking by gathered around and started yelling to her, but she didn't understand what they were saying. Finally when she didn't see Mohit she put a foot out, wobbled a bit, and then fell forward.

As the wind rushed past her, she realized what she had just done. Wham! She hit the ground hard. As she bled to death, she realized that she was happy again. She would be near her Mohit and her husband, Amit, again. She would finally be near them once again. This is Sunaina Kapoor and this is her story. She smiled peacefully and closed her eyes and began her ascent to heaven.

When the police arrived, they found a whole crowd of people standing around a woman who was smiling. After investigating for a bit, they closed her case and she was soon termed, "the crazy woman who jumped from her balcony happily". This is Sunaina Kapoor and this is also her story.



Edited by KS_Shreya - 01 June 2013 at 5:27pm

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Good one shreya

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Originally posted by amrita88

Good one shreya


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That was really touching and fascinating, Shreya. Lovely work! Smile

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it's really touchy

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wowww this was awesomeeeClap
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