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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Hey guysBig smile
im here with a brand new SSDancing
(pata hai, maine last wala abhi poora nahi kiyaLOL more about it later)
for now im posting a trailor..please read and tell me if i should continue with it or not?Smile


Prologue

'Kuvar Arjun singh' ruk jao..nahi toh!" she yelled. But he didn't listen and jumped out of her hands towards some interesting thing he had spotted in the bushes. She eventually let him go and looked behind to see her best buddy, her childhood friend Kabeer was coming towards her with a juicy looking mango in his hands which was half eaten already. "Manu, yeh dekh mujhe kya mila hai" he proudly showed off his catch to her.

"isme kya badi baat hai? Aam nahi dekha kya kabhi pehle" she wasn't bothered.

"yeh koi aisa vaisa aam nahi hai'ise main un khadoos Rajaon ke bageeche se todkar laaya hoon" he licked it.

"toh mere liye bhi ek leke aata na'"Manu made a face.

"tujhe chahiye toh khud jaakar le aana..main nahi laa sakta" Kabeer said.

"Kabeer, meri khatir bhi nahi?'" she lowered her lips, scrunched her eyes.

"theek hai chal dono saath me chalte hain, par woh tera Kuvar Arjun singh?" "tu uski fikar mat kar, woh rahega yahan..ab chal jaldi kar" she cut in.

She was Manyata, the only daughter of the Royal priest, Raj purohit as everyone called him.  Kabeer was her neighbor, her best friend from the time he was born one month after she had. They both were 20 years old. Both were studying Bachelor of Arts (in music and drama) in the nearest city. Manyata loved to dance and Kabeer loved to sing. The boy-girl divide never came between them as Manyata's Parents never restricted her at anything. Kabeer's father was away as an army officer and his mother had died a few months after he was born.

'Kuvar Arjun singh' followed them to the Mangrove and started circling her legs, in the hope that they will take him inside too.



ok so that was the prologue..
i'd post the first chapter day after tomorrowBig smile
if you want me to continue with this SS, please 'like' and 'comment'
this SS will be updated either once in 5 days or once a week at the mostEmbarrassed
and one more thing, many would be angry that i haven't ended my other SS yet and started this alreadyLOL don't worry guys..that will be updated tomorrow..Smile
lastly big Thank you to my sisu who helped me with an apt titleBig smile love youHug



Hyper links to the updates:





Chapter Two

Claimed love part 3


Claimed love chapter four

Claimed Love Chapter five

Claimed love Chapter Six

Chapter Seven



Chapter eight


Claimed Love chapter nine



Chapter Ten

Chapter Eleven
Chapter 12

Chapter 13


Chapter 14

Chapter 15

Chapter 16

Chapter 17

Chapter 18

Chapter 19

three updates

Chapter 24

Chapter 25

Last Part


Edited by ..IshqShava.. - 06 June 2014 at 7:30am

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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Hello Vibha momHug
Great starting and loved the title.Big smile
Well, I have my doubts on the character but I think that'll be cleared on coming updates.
Kuvar Arjun Singh...Manyata and Kabeer...then where's Uday.Ouch
lastly big Thank you to my sisu who helped me with an apt titleErmm  I thought you and Krishna mom were collaborating to write this one.ConfusedLOL


Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 01 June 2013 at 5:40am

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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Awsssmmm prolouge vibha dear but who is kunvr arjun singh

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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 5:41am | IP Logged
ossum cont soon 
wonder who is arjun singh 
anyhow update soon nd do pm me aswell 

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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Superb ss continue asap..

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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 6:23am | IP Logged
really really sorry for resMonkey Icons YoyoMonkey Icons Yoyo
n sorry for late commentMonkey EmoticonsMonkey Emoticons
i m busy some so i m unable to comment n read hope u understand now..Monkey Emoticons YoyoMonkey Emoticons YoyoMonkey Emoticons Yoyo
now come to update n prologue...!!Monkey Icon YoyoMonkey Icon Yoyo

very nice...story liked it so much..Monkey IconsMonkey Icons
but arjun is a cunning dog i dont like himMonkey Emoticon Cici
but still nice n awsome prologueMonkey IconMonkey Icon
Monkey Icongreat superb job nice plz update soonMonkey Icon
i m eager waiting to read more...Monkey Icon CiciMonkey Icon Cici
plz update cs very soon i m waitingMonkey Winks CiciMonkey Winks CiciMonkey Winks Cici
thanks for the pm Monkey Emoticon CiciMonkey Emoticon Cici
n plz pm me ur other update Monkey Icon YoyoMonkey Icon Yoyo
continue this asap soon...Monkey Winks YoyoMonkey Winks YoyoMonkey Winks YoyoMonkey Winks Yoyo
what's ur name dear??Monkey WinksMonkey Winks
update fast plz n cs n chapter one update very fast n plz update ur other ss plz fast Monkey Icons Cici
Monkey Icons Yoyoby the way me zainab Monkey Icons CiciMonkey Icons CiciMonkey Icons Cici
now bye.Monkey Emoticons CiciMonkey Emoticons CiciMonkey Emoticons Cici

sorry one question who is arjun??i m confused who is arjun means dogMonkey WinksMonkey WinksMonkey Winks

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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 6:25am | IP Logged
fantastic prologue...continue soon...where is uday...?nd who is this kuvar arjun singh...?nd thnx for pm...

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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 7:41am | IP Logged
OMG Shocked ...  Kuvar Arjun Singh is a dogOuchLOL!!!!!!!!!
 
Great prologue Vibha ...
eager to read moreEmbarrassed!
 
Waiting for your other update tomorrow.
 
Thanks for the PMSmile.

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